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Ten Fingers Ten Toes

The best feeling in the world.

3 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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My "baby boy" will be 45 in September. As I read your wonderful true story I recalled that all of those feelings of searing pain were forgotten as soon as I saw his little face! Being a mom (as someone once said) is the hardest job we'll ever love!

Tiny edit in your author's notes: "Being a wonderful mother to by boy is the greatest feeling." (MY, not by)

Smile.

Nice job Mom!

Karenina

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for your feedback.
reply by karenina on 05-Jul-2024
    You bet!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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You put the experience into words beautifully. No matter how hard we try to put it into writing though, there are no words to explain the feeling of holding your baby for the first time and becoming a mother. It starts with the counting of the fingers and toes and continues to standing over his crib and listening for his breathing. and then a lifetime of worries and joys. Being a mother is the BEST! Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    I love being a mother. Thank you for reviewing my writing.
Comment from Esther WG
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What a sweet and touching story. The miracle of life is wonderful! I love the description of a painful birth but it all being worth it to hold a new life in your arms. I am not a mother but the way you describe it makes it almost seem like I have been there.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you for reading my story and giving feedback. I feel honored that you like my story.
reply by Esther WG on 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much!