2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Enveloped in the Night"*
9 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned in soft and soulful imagery.
I especially liked:
I came to your door covered
with gilded stars--
(Very romantic)
This an ooh-la-la poem. Well done. Beautiful photo and presentation.
Xo. M
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned in soft and soulful imagery.
I especially liked:
I came to your door covered
with gilded stars--
(Very romantic)
This an ooh-la-la poem. Well done. Beautiful photo and presentation.
Xo. M
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The imagine of being wrapped in gilded stars is perfect. The other descriptions are equally excellent. That one just hangs on my heart. This is one of your best ever.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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The imagine of being wrapped in gilded stars is perfect. The other descriptions are equally excellent. That one just hangs on my heart. This is one of your best ever.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, . Barbara, I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from dovemarie
Dear Gypsy, Beautiful romantic poem about a woman wrapped in stars in the middle of the night. Starry skies are romantic, and Venus is the goddess of love. Dove
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Dear Gypsy, Beautiful romantic poem about a woman wrapped in stars in the middle of the night. Starry skies are romantic, and Venus is the goddess of love. Dove
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
You always select the most amazing pictures! I liked "enveloped by night" and it's the darkness that complements the jewels of starlight and emphasizes the sparkles.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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You always select the most amazing pictures! I liked "enveloped by night" and it's the darkness that complements the jewels of starlight and emphasizes the sparkles.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful day.
Love
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
it looks like she fell into a tub of glitter lol!
wonderfully sparkly imagery in this
smooth flow and connection
all around nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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it looks like she fell into a tub of glitter lol!
wonderfully sparkly imagery in this
smooth flow and connection
all around nice.
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a really great Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing with us! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Gypsy, This is a really great Tanka poem you have penned. You used great descriptive words and amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing with us! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Dreamy and beautiful presentation. The imagery put forth by the two faces to me give different emotions from the same person.one is celestial, the other is slightly more earthy. They are equally beautiful. Have a great nightRJ
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Dreamy and beautiful presentation. The imagery put forth by the two faces to me give different emotions from the same person.one is celestial, the other is slightly more earthy. They are equally beautiful. Have a great nightRJ
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
This had exquisite details through out. The visual of the stars and the sky created a gorgeous backdrop. This was a lovely poem that filled my imagination with wonder. Gretchen
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This had exquisite details through out. The visual of the stars and the sky created a gorgeous backdrop. This was a lovely poem that filled my imagination with wonder. Gretchen
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gertrude
Happy 4th!
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A romantic tanka in which the speaker becomes essentially at one with the night sky, bejeweled and gilded. Beautifully presented in this dreamy imagery. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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A romantic tanka in which the speaker becomes essentially at one with the night sky, bejeweled and gilded. Beautifully presented in this dreamy imagery. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie
Happy 4th!
Gypsy