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Final Words of a King

The king's final words to his people

2 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
Excellent
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This story, Final Words of a King, are well stated within this last gathering of the self-annihilating citizenry of Beran. This unity should be celebrated, since the alternative would be shameful execution.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Chip Whitley
Good
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This feels pretty boilerplate medieval period fantasy approach to the prompt. Well written but feels well-worn. lovely picture to accompany the work and place the reader within the proper headspace. A joy to read.

 Comment Written 04-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
    Thank you