The Last Reflection
thoughts on life6 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a wonderful story of various characters as they face the end of grandmother's life. Their true nature's are revealed when they are outside the dying woman's room. Fortunately, a devoted grandson is willing to listen to the wisdom she wants to impart.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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This is a wonderful story of various characters as they face the end of grandmother's life. Their true nature's are revealed when they are outside the dying woman's room. Fortunately, a devoted grandson is willing to listen to the wisdom she wants to impart.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much--I'm glad you understood my intentions with this piece. Much appreciated.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh dear, Noah, that's not very respectful! But very funny after all that grandmotherly advice from such a sweet old lady! Well done and good luck in the contest! A strong contender. Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Oh dear, Noah, that's not very respectful! But very funny after all that grandmotherly advice from such a sweet old lady! Well done and good luck in the contest! A strong contender. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I guess you may have met the challenge though I was thinking when first read the instructions that it would be our own passing words we mutter before leaving our frame behind.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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I guess you may have met the challenge though I was thinking when first read the instructions that it would be our own passing words we mutter before leaving our frame behind.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much--it did say fiction, but my dying character does speak what I would say if I were dying.
Comment from Colorado Owl
I enjoyed reading your story... such a beautiful death! How true that we rarely appreciate the blessings around us. Noah was given a great gift of her final words. Thank you for this story.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed reading your story... such a beautiful death! How true that we rarely appreciate the blessings around us. Noah was given a great gift of her final words. Thank you for this story.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Trent Delaney
Bravo. Thank you so much for sharing this piece. I recall almost going through the same scenario as a kid when my uncle left us. Definitely a nice piece of work.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Bravo. Thank you so much for sharing this piece. I recall almost going through the same scenario as a kid when my uncle left us. Definitely a nice piece of work.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jessizero
Those were some wonderful last words. I liked this bit of fiction you crafted here. It makes me ponder my own mortality, which means it touched me, so that's good. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Those were some wonderful last words. I liked this bit of fiction you crafted here. It makes me ponder my own mortality, which means it touched me, so that's good. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!