Colin's Catastrophe
Entirely C3 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a very interesting story told only with words beginning with "C." You did a good job pulling it off. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was a very interesting story told only with words beginning with "C." You did a good job pulling it off. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a fun and creative piece that showcases your skill in crafting a poem under specific (and very difficult) constraints! The imagery of crows, candles, coffin, and cemetery creates a stark scene. The repetition of "C" throughout the passage not only adds a rhythmic quality but also enhances the dark humor! Great job.
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I thought this was a fun and creative piece that showcases your skill in crafting a poem under specific (and very difficult) constraints! The imagery of crows, candles, coffin, and cemetery creates a stark scene. The repetition of "C" throughout the passage not only adds a rhythmic quality but also enhances the dark humor! Great job.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Collin's Catastrophe, seems to tell a tough time at the cemetery where the crows have been flustered to the point of being a problem for the ceremony's continuation.
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This story, Collin's Catastrophe, seems to tell a tough time at the cemetery where the crows have been flustered to the point of being a problem for the ceremony's continuation.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024