Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aw... the first two lines set the stage... then WHAM- mother nature crying!

excellent kimo!
great imagery and smooth flow

may i suggest a black background with a very light blue font to blend in with the pic... like flowing water? just a thought ;)


thank you for participating in this week's event and sharing your poem

shelley :)

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024

Thank you for your review and suggestions.
Blessings
Shirley

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your haiku beautifully captures the power of a waterfall. I love how you described it as "Mother Nature's sad tears." The imagery of "thunders onto rocks below" shares the force and sound of the cascading water. I love how that contrasts with the stillness that it disrupts. Great job!

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024

Thanks so much.
I appreciate your review.
Blessings
Shirley

Comment from royowen

Excellent

It's a good way of associating nature as having very poor stewards...us, so, earth will finally display her real displeasure one day, but right now it seems like she's just protesting, well done Shirley blessings Roy

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 30-Jun-2024

Thanks Roy,
I appreciate you always.
Blessings
Shirley

reply by royowen on 30-Jun-2024

Blessings Roy