Collection of a Lifetime
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Gardener's Lullaby"a collection of poetry and experience
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Comment from Colorado Owl
Talking to flowers? I completley understand!
This is a beautiful, sweet poem. As a gardener, I've said similar things to my garden, but not as well as you. Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Talking to flowers? I completley understand!
This is a beautiful, sweet poem. As a gardener, I've said similar things to my garden, but not as well as you. Great job!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and your presentation is lovely. I wish you the very best with your weekend and I also wish you the very best with your garden that you are now putting to bed. May you have a lovely day. Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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This is very well written and your presentation is lovely. I wish you the very best with your weekend and I also wish you the very best with your garden that you are now putting to bed. May you have a lovely day. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much! Best wishes!
Comment from RodG
The Speaker DOES seem to be singing a lullaby to her garden, probably in Fall, preparing it for Winter's long sleep. The mood of this poem is so serene and comforting, you could be speaking to any child. Nice! Rod
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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The Speaker DOES seem to be singing a lullaby to her garden, probably in Fall, preparing it for Winter's long sleep. The mood of this poem is so serene and comforting, you could be speaking to any child. Nice! Rod
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Earl Corp
Kind of hurrying the seasons along , we're still in summer. Nice rhyming scheme you used in your poem. This could have been a contest entry. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Kind of hurrying the seasons along , we're still in summer. Nice rhyming scheme you used in your poem. This could have been a contest entry. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
What an interesting concept to put one's to bed, to protect it from the possible harm that the weather can do in its harsh attack on the delicate balance that is nature, well done, great write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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What an interesting concept to put one's to bed, to protect it from the possible harm that the weather can do in its harsh attack on the delicate balance that is nature, well done, great write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
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Welcome
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, gansach
I knew you'd have the word bed somewhere in your last line ending the line so you get that rhyme. That's how my mind thinks it thinks in meter and rhyme and it really does. Sometimes I think I'm channeling some dead person or something.
Your rhyming is quite good. You have no set meter. This poem is very charming. The reason I knew you would put bed in the last line is because I wrote a similar poem one time. Isn't that a hoot?
I enjoyed reading your chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Hi, gansach
I knew you'd have the word bed somewhere in your last line ending the line so you get that rhyme. That's how my mind thinks it thinks in meter and rhyme and it really does. Sometimes I think I'm channeling some dead person or something.
Your rhyming is quite good. You have no set meter. This poem is very charming. The reason I knew you would put bed in the last line is because I wrote a similar poem one time. Isn't that a hoot?
I enjoyed reading your chapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind teview!
Comment from Liliana Tricks
5-star rating. Your poem was truly beautiful and touching, capturing the essence of nature's cycle with such grace. Keep up the fantastic writingð???ð???ð???ð???ð???
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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5-star rating. Your poem was truly beautiful and touching, capturing the essence of nature's cycle with such grace. Keep up the fantastic writingð???ð???ð???ð???ð???
Comment Written 28-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!