2024 Japanese Poetry
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5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I wondered if 'pass' should be 'past' in the last line but I could well appreciate either. Your theme of emptiness and barrenness is well portrayed in this beautifully presented post. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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I wondered if 'pass' should be 'past' in the last line but I could well appreciate either. Your theme of emptiness and barrenness is well portrayed in this beautifully presented post. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Now I'm wondering why those seeds of love didn't grow. Is it because of her choice or is it because the person who planted them didn't cultivate them? Inquiry minds want to know. LOL Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Now I'm wondering why those seeds of love didn't grow. Is it because of her choice or is it because the person who planted them didn't cultivate them? Inquiry minds want to know. LOL Great job.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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One of beautiful things about haiku and other Japanese poetry is that it means different things to different people. The magic is in pondering what is the meaning.
Personally, I was thinking about a gypsy furtune teller who told me, "you are going to have many husbands but the relationships will not last." She was right. I married four times aond I divorced four times. I don't know how to chose a good man. Being bipolar doesn't help either. I gave up searching for a husband.
Inquiring minds are great
Thank you very much. I appreciate your five stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
now i'm hearing sowing the seeds of love by tears for fears in my head lol!
love the gold, purple, and pink colours
wonderful imagistic word choices and a smooth flow through the lines
nice. thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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now i'm hearing sowing the seeds of love by tears for fears in my head lol!
love the gold, purple, and pink colours
wonderful imagistic word choices and a smooth flow through the lines
nice. thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Sad, nostalgic, and haunting. Well done you. Still no word on my new home. Waiting in limbo is not my favorite place. Have a good week and send good wishes for my new home my way please. Karen
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Sad, nostalgic, and haunting. Well done you. Still no word on my new home. Waiting in limbo is not my favorite place. Have a good week and send good wishes for my new home my way please. Karen
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I'll pray for you. I know how it is.
Thank you very much, Karen.
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
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Thanks so much for the good wishes. Karen
Comment from royowen
It's a marvellous thing to think that we have seeds deposited within us that may never mature because the lack of sunshine is not there to help to make them germinate, only rain and tears, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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It's a marvellous thing to think that we have seeds deposited within us that may never mature because the lack of sunshine is not there to help to make them germinate, only rain and tears, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
Have a wonderful night.
Gypsy
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Welcome Gypsy