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Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This is a good poetic view of the water cycle. Yes, rain can be a mirror of God.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Hi MariVal,
This is a good poetic view of the water cycle. Yes, rain can be a mirror of God.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Joan, I appreciate your review.
Gypsy
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You are most kindly welcome, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God created everything we see and feel. He hands have been on it all. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. I know your poetry is inspired by God. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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God created everything we see and feel. He hands have been on it all. Thank you for sharing this beauty with us. I know your poetry is inspired by God. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
cool 25 words of imagistic thoughtful choices
love the shades of blue - totally fits the theme and mood
one thing i noticed:
the clouds full of rain
that sprinkles <-- since this is referring to the clouds, i think it should be singular...
"the clouds full of rain sprinkle"
if the noun is plural, verb is singular - if the noun is singular, the verb is plural
"the cloud full of rain sprinkles"
other than that, a great loving poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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cool 25 words of imagistic thoughtful choices
love the shades of blue - totally fits the theme and mood
one thing i noticed:
the clouds full of rain
that sprinkles <-- since this is referring to the clouds, i think it should be singular...
"the clouds full of rain sprinkle"
if the noun is plural, verb is singular - if the noun is singular, the verb is plural
"the cloud full of rain sprinkles"
other than that, a great loving poem!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Thank you for your help.
Gypsy
Comment from dovemarie
HI Gypsy, I love the picture of the rain sprinkled tree looking down at the ocean. It is true that "God's face" is in everything we see, as He created the beauty of nature for us to enjoy. Dove
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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HI Gypsy, I love the picture of the rain sprinkled tree looking down at the ocean. It is true that "God's face" is in everything we see, as He created the beauty of nature for us to enjoy. Dove
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautiful presentation and words that capture the mood. I like the tapestry and your expression of what is evaporation of water vapor, rain, which in itself is fascinating and more intricate than meets the eye.
Thanks for sharing.
RE
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Beautiful presentation and words that capture the mood. I like the tapestry and your expression of what is evaporation of water vapor, rain, which in itself is fascinating and more intricate than meets the eye.
Thanks for sharing.
RE
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I enjoyed the way your free verse evolves from the vastness of the ocean to each tiny drop of moisture, representing God's omnipotence in vivid imagery. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed the way your free verse evolves from the vastness of the ocean to each tiny drop of moisture, representing God's omnipotence in vivid imagery. Well done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
What a good reflection, water in the form of rain or a dewdrop is the perfect reflecting device that exposes the light, in all its reflected glory, beautifully written as always Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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What a good reflection, water in the form of rain or a dewdrop is the perfect reflecting device that exposes the light, in all its reflected glory, beautifully written as always Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thank you so much for providing us with a spiritual poem that emphasizes the fact that God is the creator and that his face can be seen in creation. I love the picture and the presentation. Blessings on you and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for providing us with a spiritual poem that emphasizes the fact that God is the creator and that his face can be seen in creation. I love the picture and the presentation. Blessings on you and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You are most welcome my friend.
Comment from lyenochka
I agree that everything that God created reflects His fingerprints or as your poem says "His face." And each person reflects His image as that is how God made us. Loved how you took us through the life of a raindrop in this 25 word poem!
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reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I agree that everything that God created reflects His fingerprints or as your poem says "His face." And each person reflects His image as that is how God made us. Loved how you took us through the life of a raindrop in this 25 word poem!
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you, big sister, your review of this poem means a lot to me.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the strong reverence in this. You connect all the dots and bring the credit to God. This was beautifully crafted and I could visualize each thing and how they merged together. One big happy world. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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I love the strong reverence in this. You connect all the dots and bring the credit to God. This was beautifully crafted and I could visualize each thing and how they merged together. One big happy world. Gretchen
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs