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Comment from jessizero
This was a wonderful poem for the "spiritual" writing prompt! I absolutely loved your last stanza. This definitely deserves a "six." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This was a wonderful poem for the "spiritual" writing prompt! I absolutely loved your last stanza. This definitely deserves a "six." Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Jessi.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
It sounds like she has broken up. It sounds like the guy at the end was her last love before she left him because he was beneath her
I like how you use the qualities of glass in your poem You talk about reflections and transparency.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
It sounds like she has broken up. It sounds like the guy at the end was her last love before she left him because he was beneath her
I like how you use the qualities of glass in your poem You talk about reflections and transparency.
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Pam.