The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from karenina
Between these greedy mafia creeps and the ghosts, I'm all in on some serious ghostly hijinx!
Just sayin...
Thank God (literally)Sebastian is there to provide spiritual strength!
One more chapter?
Why not!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Between these greedy mafia creeps and the ghosts, I'm all in on some serious ghostly hijinx!
Just sayin...
Thank God (literally)Sebastian is there to provide spiritual strength!
One more chapter?
Why not!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Wow...still up and reading on. Not to brag (well, maybe a tiny bit) but you are reminding me of when I use to binge on a James Patterson book... a few times I read a book from start to finish.... I'm beyond thrilled that it is holding your attention. You must be tired.
Love ya
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I thought I was tired...
But (in case you haven't heard this a million times)--
You have this awesome way of leaving a tease at the end of each chapter and I COULD NOT stop!
Comment from lyenochka
Esther is rather frustrating. She's not tour typical strong women characters and seems to hold back more when things are really critical. It's good that Sebastian is there to take charge and speak for her.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Esther is rather frustrating. She's not tour typical strong women characters and seems to hold back more when things are really critical. It's good that Sebastian is there to take charge and speak for her.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2024
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Esther is struggling to leave the woman of the 1800s behind and become a stronger woman, but she does have difficult times. She's growing...bit by bit! Maybe Madeline will give her a little of her backbone. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
This another terrific chapter, Carol. You really master the suspense and drama so very well. So now they have been warned, but will they be in time to ward off the hangers? A big hug, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This another terrific chapter, Carol. You really master the suspense and drama so very well. So now they have been warned, but will they be in time to ward off the hangers? A big hug, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 23-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so muc Ulla. I just couldn't have a bland treasure hunt. Had to put a few more twists and turns in the story. Glad you enjoyed it.
Have a great day! Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
The drama and action never ceases - what an awful development, for all of them. These greedy and cruel people will show no mercy. Divine intervention is needed!
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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The drama and action never ceases - what an awful development, for all of them. These greedy and cruel people will show no mercy. Divine intervention is needed!
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Yes, battle lines are drawn and its difficult for two mortal women and a handful of ghosts to battle the gangsters. Hopefully someone comes up with an idea. Thans!
Have a great day!
Comment from BethShelby
This is another excellent chapter. I don't know how you manage to juggle all these characters around and keep up with them. I would think the ghosts might be able to frighten these men who probably don't believe in ghosts
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This is another excellent chapter. I don't know how you manage to juggle all these characters around and keep up with them. I would think the ghosts might be able to frighten these men who probably don't believe in ghosts
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Wow! Beth...As always, I am blown away by your thoughts and the shimmering stars. I am thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I will read your story from start to finish when I get settled, You write, well and I am l.ooking forward to delving in. I have;t read m uch for a while because of the moving. Good work, Karen
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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I will read your story from start to finish when I get settled, You write, well and I am l.ooking forward to delving in. I have;t read m uch for a while because of the moving. Good work, Karen
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks for stopping by, Karen. Appreciate your time and comments.
Have a great day! Carol
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I think it will be time for a bit of spooky, ghostly interference? A few timely thrown books? I can think of loads of fun things the ghosts could do to scare off the crooks. This is going in a fun direction, Carol and I can't wait to read on. Well done, my friend. (a couple of small errors below) Love and hugs dear one. :)) Sandra xxx
Eleanor (Esther) wailed, "Nooooo!"
"Frankie Saladino, the man who serves in the same position. "Frankie Saladino, the man who serves in... written twice?
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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I think it will be time for a bit of spooky, ghostly interference? A few timely thrown books? I can think of loads of fun things the ghosts could do to scare off the crooks. This is going in a fun direction, Carol and I can't wait to read on. Well done, my friend. (a couple of small errors below) Love and hugs dear one. :)) Sandra xxx
Eleanor (Esther) wailed, "Nooooo!"
"Frankie Saladino, the man who serves in the same position. "Frankie Saladino, the man who serves in... written twice?
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Finally got back to making the corrections and I thank you for pointing them out. It's been a crazy weekend. Posted three chapters and a flash then decided I was painting...LOL I've lost my mind.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The worst thing possible, besides the banshees in the ballroom, is having the bad guys on the outside know about the treasure. Well, the bad guys are arriving, and the two living souls are in trouble. I don't know what ghosts would do with a fortune, but they could turn on their charming scare-the-life-out-of-y-living abilities. Very scary fun chapter.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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The worst thing possible, besides the banshees in the ballroom, is having the bad guys on the outside know about the treasure. Well, the bad guys are arriving, and the two living souls are in trouble. I don't know what ghosts would do with a fortune, but they could turn on their charming scare-the-life-out-of-y-living abilities. Very scary fun chapter.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Hi Carol. Thanks as always for reading and commenting on the story. I really appreciate your time and thoughts.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
Okay, this chapter deserves a six, so here it is. This story is getting more exciting by the moment. I can't wait to see how you continue the story. Excellent writing. Again, I must say that this is one of your best stories.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Okay, this chapter deserves a six, so here it is. This story is getting more exciting by the moment. I can't wait to see how you continue the story. Excellent writing. Again, I must say that this is one of your best stories.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Smiles to you! Glad all the things are working for you in this story. Lots of things unfolding with gangsters, demons, ghosts and mortals. Wow! Thank you for always supporting me and enjoying!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and very well written chapter. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I am enjoying reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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This is a very interesting and very well written chapter. You used great descriptive words and very good dialogue. I am enjoying reading and reviewing this. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much, Teri, appreciate your time and the review. I've been painting my house so I'm behind as usual. Glad you enjoyed.
Smiles, Carol