Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Writers will write whatever comes to mind. Authors on the other hand have a plan organized which directs them from the start to a finish. Needless to add, I write for the fun of it, and I think you have too.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

---

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Many thanks Tom. I needed to read this

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

sometimes people or circumstances (like Doris) tend to sway our good sense and we doubt ourselves or someone else. Your lovely story told that lesson very well and it was an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

---

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Many thanks for the review and kind wishes, Carol

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi Claire, what a fun story!! It really looked bad for poor Anna. She was right to think Doris was up to no good. Of course, she thought the same of Joe, but, as we see, it ends up just the way Anna needed it to!!

Great job and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2024

---

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024

Thanks, Rhonda. Funny how personal or observed experiences provide good plots

reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 22-Jun-2024

Very true! There's a little bit of us in everything we write.