Pineapple
A Cinquain poem about pineapples2 total reviews
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I certainly hope it's OK to have the poem not mention the fruit. I'm just wondering if pineapple should've been somewhere in the poem. The other entries that I've reviewed mentioned the name of the fruit within the poem
You paint a mouthwatering picture in this poem
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I certainly hope it's OK to have the poem not mention the fruit. I'm just wondering if pineapple should've been somewhere in the poem. The other entries that I've reviewed mentioned the name of the fruit within the poem
You paint a mouthwatering picture in this poem
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was a lovely piece about a summer fruit (in this case, a pineapple). You got the syllable counts right, and you chose your words well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was a lovely piece about a summer fruit (in this case, a pineapple). You got the syllable counts right, and you chose your words well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024