2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Old Cherry Tree"*
5 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
cool... like how you did the low hanging branches and the high hanging branches with the kids and the birds... brings about a nice image of the whole tree
great tanka haiku combo
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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cool... like how you did the low hanging branches and the high hanging branches with the kids and the birds... brings about a nice image of the whole tree
great tanka haiku combo
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you , Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Old trees and old people all have a purpose in this life. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. I enjoyed reading and viewing. Cherry Blossom are one of my favorite things on earth.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Old trees and old people all have a purpose in this life. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. I enjoyed reading and viewing. Cherry Blossom are one of my favorite things on earth.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reviewing my poem. I appreciate your time and kind words. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Wow! What a beautiful posting. The colors are so rich and your words present the theme very well. It's such a wonderful thing that God's creation provide for those low down, (perhaps in spirit), and those who are lifted up. The imagery of children relishing the cherries is a very pleasing and endearing one,
RJ
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Wow! What a beautiful posting. The colors are so rich and your words present the theme very well. It's such a wonderful thing that God's creation provide for those low down, (perhaps in spirit), and those who are lifted up. The imagery of children relishing the cherries is a very pleasing and endearing one,
RJ
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You?re welcome
Comment from lyenochka
I love ancient trees as they have so much history in their branches, They provide shelter for animals and birds and provide food for people as well. And their regular seasonal changes give us a sense faithfulness.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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I love ancient trees as they have so much history in their branches, They provide shelter for animals and birds and provide food for people as well. And their regular seasonal changes give us a sense faithfulness.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Did you know cherry trees don't reach maturity until 30 years old? I didn't know until today. I think it's the same with people. LoL
Thank you very much, big sis. I hope you are having an awesome day. Atticus and I went out on a date to the children's museum and lunch. He was so tired on our way back he almost fell asleep on the bus.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Ricky1024
Makes me think back about forty years ago to my cherry tree.
It was a dwarf, cherry tree.But it would do quite well with the fruit.
And of course.
The birds were very well fed also before me!
Well done.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Makes me think back about forty years ago to my cherry tree.
It was a dwarf, cherry tree.But it would do quite well with the fruit.
And of course.
The birds were very well fed also before me!
Well done.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 19-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy