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Free verse

2 total reviews 
Comment from Douglas Goff
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This is a nicely flowing Free Verse. I like the presentation of the content.
Especially this verse:

Flexing protective wings, wrapping around those now complimented with the edge of truth, dynamically curving, cutting, and artistically finding harmony within the substance of man.

Most enjoyable!
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 Comment Written 18-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to review my work. I am pleased you enjoyed.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi, Gordon. Oh my. You've written a treatise here. You talk of all the good things we can expect from the Lord if we are believers and do good deeds. Your descriptions of them are quite ornate with beautiful words and imagery

I really enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much for the great review my friend, many blessings.