The Floating Mask
A short story3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like this one! Clearly written with some very funny, hysterical dialogue from the protagonist and equally amusing, patient and forbearing dialogue from the wife. Understandable that the prompt could send anyone to distraction. And, after all that, the story was decided. Great visual too. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I like this one! Clearly written with some very funny, hysterical dialogue from the protagonist and equally amusing, patient and forbearing dialogue from the wife. Understandable that the prompt could send anyone to distraction. And, after all that, the story was decided. Great visual too. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Debbie. I just tried going at the contest with a different angle. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and stop in. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Erika Whittle
Lmfao
Your partner's frustration was something real! I that you robbed a bank and forgot the mask! Hahahaha but at least you got your story! And a funny one at that!!!!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Lmfao
Your partner's frustration was something real! I that you robbed a bank and forgot the mask! Hahahaha but at least you got your story! And a funny one at that!!!!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Erika. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. That was my goal. Lol.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
LOL Where is my 6 when I need it? Great story. The humor was on point and the ending sold it. This brought me a chuckle and was very well written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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LOL Where is my 6 when I need it? Great story. The humor was on point and the ending sold it. This brought me a chuckle and was very well written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for the great review and the big six offer, Marilyn. That was the main purpose, to give a few folk a laugh. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.