2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and very cool picture. Would make a cool album cover, the band would be called Desertion Squad, and the album, Hanging Orb of Doom
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and very cool picture. Would make a cool album cover, the band would be called Desertion Squad, and the album, Hanging Orb of Doom
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
The Black Sea is an inspired touch in this poem. So many nuances - the actual sea so named; the darkness of the sea at night especially close to shore ( someone who has seen this told me starlight brightens the open sea) and the ominous note of mystery which is emphasized by the second line.
Dramatic and effective imagery.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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The Black Sea is an inspired touch in this poem. So many nuances - the actual sea so named; the darkness of the sea at night especially close to shore ( someone who has seen this told me starlight brightens the open sea) and the ominous note of mystery which is emphasized by the second line.
Dramatic and effective imagery.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Cheryl. I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You're welcome. How is your day going? My son and his family are on a camping trip and I'm taking care of my grand dog.
Love and blessings, Cheryl
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Lucky dog. I'm doing well, how are you?
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I am okay. Happy to be back on Fanstory. I'd been neglecting my writing.
Comment from shelley kaye
love the imagery in this!
the moon's shadows on a black sea in crimson... cool thought!
great word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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love the imagery in this!
the moon's shadows on a black sea in crimson... cool thought!
great word choices and smooth flow
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What an amazing Darkness Haiku. The color red in contrast with the black sea really created drama in this unique poem about the dark night with a huge strawberry moon.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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What an amazing Darkness Haiku. The color red in contrast with the black sea really created drama in this unique poem about the dark night with a huge strawberry moon.
Excellent.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very beautiful poem. The imagery is strong, and as close my eyes I can see the crimsom shadow on the black water, particularly, when I imagine that there is a flash of light.
Beautiful and scenic poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Very beautiful poem. The imagery is strong, and as close my eyes I can see the crimsom shadow on the black water, particularly, when I imagine that there is a flash of light.
Beautiful and scenic poem.
RJ
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You're welcome
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You're welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think you undoubtedly have created a visual picture here, Gypsy! I had no idea that a black sea or strawberry moon existed. But why would I doubt the wonder of nature captured in your beautiful post? Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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I think you undoubtedly have created a visual picture here, Gypsy! I had no idea that a black sea or strawberry moon existed. But why would I doubt the wonder of nature captured in your beautiful post? Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie. Yes, all the full moons have a name. I added a link. There are two full moon calendars, I like the Native American one.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for reminding me of the strawberry moon! Indeed my granddaughter picked some strawberries off our balcony today.
I liked your color imagery of black and red in your poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for reminding me of the strawberry moon! Indeed my granddaughter picked some strawberries off our balcony today.
I liked your color imagery of black and red in your poem.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister.
Love,
MariVal