Crystal Drops
When rain falls...2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Crystal Drops, has the proper formatting and identifies the water that is pulled to earth by gravity and makes everything outside wet. ..........
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This 5-7-5, Crystal Drops, has the proper formatting and identifies the water that is pulled to earth by gravity and makes everything outside wet. ..........
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for reviewing my poem! Your words are so greatly appreciated. Have a nice day!
Comment from AP Apgar
What an excellent Haiku poem and picture presentation supporting - you have a good syllable count - your message goes perfectly with your image - well done - you used you title perfectly - taking advantage of the opportunity to tied in into the poem. I have found over the years that the economy of words is an asset - and a challenge - Haiku, for example is actually 17 syllables or less - unless otherwise specified in a challenge or contest - eliminating unnecessary words for example; like "the" "and" , and the like, without making it sound like a telegram lol. Good job - looking forward to reading some poems you have written so far. Bless -Alan
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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What an excellent Haiku poem and picture presentation supporting - you have a good syllable count - your message goes perfectly with your image - well done - you used you title perfectly - taking advantage of the opportunity to tied in into the poem. I have found over the years that the economy of words is an asset - and a challenge - Haiku, for example is actually 17 syllables or less - unless otherwise specified in a challenge or contest - eliminating unnecessary words for example; like "the" "and" , and the like, without making it sound like a telegram lol. Good job - looking forward to reading some poems you have written so far. Bless -Alan
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem! Your words are greatly appreciated. Have a lovely day!