Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
This short poem uses an imaginative and new metaphor for sheer curtains blowing in the breeze. Nice artwork and color scheme.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great weekend.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan

 Comment Written 14-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024

Thanks for the read and encouraging feedback.

reply by dragonpoet on 15-Jun-2024

You're welcome on both accounts, Harry.
Joan

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

Good imagery in this. I also enjoyed the graphic that you used. Strong overall. Nothing quite like a summer breeze coming through an open window. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thanks for the read and response.

Comment from Barry Penfold

Excellent

Love the image and the fifteen- word poem is a good fit. I cdertainly can recall many times this has happened at my place. That sudden breeze when you open the window. The curtains go everywhere.
Thanks for sharing and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024

Thanks for the read and response. I wish you many wonderful reads and days.