Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from nomi338
You are missing a character. He or she should be named Total Chaos or something like that. This seems to be where we are heading right? I believe that Total Chaos would fit right in. But hey, this is your duck, do whatever, I will still read and review it.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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You are missing a character. He or she should be named Total Chaos or something like that. This seems to be where we are heading right? I believe that Total Chaos would fit right in. But hey, this is your duck, do whatever, I will still read and review it.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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I think Total Chaos might stop by.
Comment from lyenochka
I did like "Many clones make light work" but really had to work at getting Zsa Zsa Gabor and Eva and of course, "Green Acres." I sure hope it's not a clone of Rump and Bythen running!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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I did like "Many clones make light work" but really had to work at getting Zsa Zsa Gabor and Eva and of course, "Green Acres." I sure hope it's not a clone of Rump and Bythen running!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Someone should be watching reruns of the Clone Ranger.
Comment from jim vecchio
With a little bit or revision, this could be a party scene on the old "Rowan and Martin's Laugh In" and you could have John Wane roaming about muttering about democrats. Keep it up.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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With a little bit or revision, this could be a party scene on the old "Rowan and Martin's Laugh In" and you could have John Wane roaming about muttering about democrats. Keep it up.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Jim
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Good work, Bill.
Comment from royowen
The story continues with the main character of Ronald Rump and. President Bythen. You are the master of names Bill, you never seem to run out.of fitting names for your characters, great script Bill, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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The story continues with the main character of Ronald Rump and. President Bythen. You are the master of names Bill, you never seem to run out.of fitting names for your characters, great script Bill, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Roy
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Welcome
Comment from Barry Penfold
Total madness Bill. But I like it. Clever dialogue and my frequent smiles leave a good memory of my read. Thanks for sharing and I will have to keep coming back for more.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Total madness Bill. But I like it. Clever dialogue and my frequent smiles leave a good memory of my read. Thanks for sharing and I will have to keep coming back for more.
Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Barry
Comment from judiverse
An astrologer might be a good person to have around at election time. I don't think cloning should be a campaign issue, I like Powell Wrent saying his name and then adding "and this is CNN." Hed should not be underestimated. After all, Truman was a haberdasher and went on to become president. Some of the names are rather confusing. You added some new ones, too, in your dialogue, like Cha Cha Gottmorr.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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An astrologer might be a good person to have around at election time. I don't think cloning should be a campaign issue, I like Powell Wrent saying his name and then adding "and this is CNN." Hed should not be underestimated. After all, Truman was a haberdasher and went on to become president. Some of the names are rather confusing. You added some new ones, too, in your dialogue, like Cha Cha Gottmorr.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Cha Cha is a spin on Zsa Zsa Gabor and her sister Ava.
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Hadn't thought of the Gabor sisters in years. Still, I don't know how they're relevant to your script. judi
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They are working their way in.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I love these characters through each submission. Lots of fun for sure. I wish you all the best going forward with all of these! They are most definitely interesting
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I love these characters through each submission. Lots of fun for sure. I wish you all the best going forward with all of these! They are most definitely interesting
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Nicole