2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Your Number One Obsession ".
14 total reviews
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I enjoyed reading this and the vividness of the words that you chose to use. The graphic goes along perfectly well here too. All the best going forward with your work from here
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I enjoyed reading this and the vividness of the words that you chose to use. The graphic goes along perfectly well here too. All the best going forward with your work from here
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicole
Gypsy
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I'm sure most of us have felt this way at least once! We see someone on tv, and wonder what it would be like to actually be with this person. A fun and harmless fantasy!
Nice one!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I'm sure most of us have felt this way at least once! We see someone on tv, and wonder what it would be like to actually be with this person. A fun and harmless fantasy!
Nice one!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Jodi
Gypsy
Comment from Esther Brown
Too close to the truth. Having been obsessed with my lover Knight I know exactly how the hairs on the back of the neck stand up when he comes into a room, and you can't wait to jump all over your lover in an elevator. Too much for this old lady's heart. Funny only when you look back with 20/20 hindsight. Esther
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Too close to the truth. Having been obsessed with my lover Knight I know exactly how the hairs on the back of the neck stand up when he comes into a room, and you can't wait to jump all over your lover in an elevator. Too much for this old lady's heart. Funny only when you look back with 20/20 hindsight. Esther
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Hahaha. I know what you mean. Passion doesn't age as fast as the body. I bet there some 80sh...90sh.. person who still want to get it on. LoL
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from juliaSjames
Hello Marival
I think every teenager, girl or boy, goes through a stage of being obsessed with public figures hence fan clubs etc. But in this poem she has crossed a line. No wonder stars have bodyguards and heavy security at their homes.
An excellent, creepy write. Oh my!
Blessings, Cheryl
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Hello Marival
I think every teenager, girl or boy, goes through a stage of being obsessed with public figures hence fan clubs etc. But in this poem she has crossed a line. No wonder stars have bodyguards and heavy security at their homes.
An excellent, creepy write. Oh my!
Blessings, Cheryl
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Yes, stalkers are usually violent or mentally unstable.
Cheryl,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Whoa! I hate that I like this so much! Being inside that mind was so intriguing. Your masterful touch made me like the fine line here between fascinating and out-and-out creepy. This made for a most memorable poem, Gypsy! Great job. xo
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Whoa! I hate that I like this so much! Being inside that mind was so intriguing. Your masterful touch made me like the fine line here between fascinating and out-and-out creepy. This made for a most memorable poem, Gypsy! Great job. xo
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Rachelle,
lol ... I love horror movies and books. I did write a poem on the line between love and mental illness.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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What's it called, Gypsy? I want to read it. You've piqued my curiosity.
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LoL reading what I wrote now it's very funny. What I meant to say, is that the line between obsession and mental illness is a fine line.
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Ohhh, gotcha! Very true, indeed.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and while I'm flattered, I must tell you that I think we should just be friends; oh sure, It'll hurt for awhile, but you'll find somebody else----not aimed a
me, is it? Never mind,
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and while I'm flattered, I must tell you that I think we should just be friends; oh sure, It'll hurt for awhile, but you'll find somebody else----not aimed a
me, is it? Never mind,
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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LoL... outch.. you broke my heart
Mike,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem caused me to smile because the characters in my novels become real to see. I see them as if they are beside me. I hear them speak. I do understand. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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This poem caused me to smile because the characters in my novels become real to see. I see them as if they are beside me. I hear them speak. I do understand. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Debra White
Hi Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your free verse.
The theme and presentation are a perfect match.
His skin tastes salty for sure!
Best wishes as always, Debra
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Hi Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your free verse.
The theme and presentation are a perfect match.
His skin tastes salty for sure!
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debra
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you involve all the senses in this poem. But the narrator sounds like a stalker with an active imagination. I think the one he/she is infatuated with might be alarmed!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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I like how you involve all the senses in this poem. But the narrator sounds like a stalker with an active imagination. I think the one he/she is infatuated with might be alarmed!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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I had the word stalcker first and a lot of the reviewers told me it was the wrong word beacouse it implies violent behavior. I guess it's a fine line. I agree with you. Obsession can be destructive.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Hi, Gypsy,
I love this fun poem about obsession--which might be a better title than stalker, which usually has violent undertones. Nonetheless, your poem is alluring, original, and sweet.
Good luck with this and all your writing!
Cindy
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Hi, Gypsy,
I love this fun poem about obsession--which might be a better title than stalker, which usually has violent undertones. Nonetheless, your poem is alluring, original, and sweet.
Good luck with this and all your writing!
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Cindy
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy