2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Clear Blue Eyes".
6 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Edgar Allan Poe is smiling as he read your poem. My youngest son, Steven is a fan of Poe and calls him the physco dude from Baltimore. Anyway, once again your God given talent shines through. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Edgar Allan Poe is smiling as he read your poem. My youngest son, Steven is a fan of Poe and calls him the physco dude from Baltimore. Anyway, once again your God given talent shines through. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
When I read this, I immediately thought of Edgar Alan Poe and how he grieved the loss of his young wife. I think she married very young and he was older. It affected him deeply.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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When I read this, I immediately thought of Edgar Alan Poe and how he grieved the loss of his young wife. I think she married very young and he was older. It affected him deeply.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Yes, he was deeply in love and very depressed after her death. Out of his depression came out a beautiful thing. I think that happens to many artists.
Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
Marival
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a very haunting poem. Whenever a young person dies for whatever reason we feel it is unjustified. Youth should be wasted on fun and learning, not death. Beautiful and I think Poe would approve. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This was a very haunting poem. Whenever a young person dies for whatever reason we feel it is unjustified. Youth should be wasted on fun and learning, not death. Beautiful and I think Poe would approve. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Gretchen
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is a sad poem, but shows how death affects not just the deceased, but also the emptiness very often experienced by the loved ones left behind. It is a topic, I believe we never truly understand, but accept. The black and white motif, crow and pale human forms, are well fitted to the almost macabre atmosphere that surrounds the theme. It is a very effective poem.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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This is a sad poem, but shows how death affects not just the deceased, but also the emptiness very often experienced by the loved ones left behind. It is a topic, I believe we never truly understand, but accept. The black and white motif, crow and pale human forms, are well fitted to the almost macabre atmosphere that surrounds the theme. It is a very effective poem.
RJ
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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RJ, Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I try to cover a variety of poems to keep it interesting. I love Edgar Allan Poe poems. He suffered from depression, like me. But out of his depression something beautiful was created. Many artists are like that.
Gypsy hugs
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Well deserved, you?re welcome.
RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
it's only 4 lines... did you forget a line? lol
other than that, still a great imagistic little verse with deep feelings flowing smoothly...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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it's only 4 lines... did you forget a line? lol
other than that, still a great imagistic little verse with deep feelings flowing smoothly...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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LoL .. yeah, I forgot. I changed it to free verse
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a hauntingly beautiful presentation, perfectly complemented by your 5 line verse with that hint of mystery and Poe-style macabre. That transition from life to death in the eyes is very powerful indeed! Very well done, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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What a hauntingly beautiful presentation, perfectly complemented by your 5 line verse with that hint of mystery and Poe-style macabre. That transition from life to death in the eyes is very powerful indeed! Very well done, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Debbie
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy