Need
a poem13 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Bill.
-You have written a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines establish your premise.
-Very good closing lines that show what is
needed in order to succeed..
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Bill.
-You have written a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening lines establish your premise.
-Very good closing lines that show what is
needed in order to succeed..
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Pam
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You are welcome, Bill.
Comment from lyenochka
Sounds like a healthy mind and spirit! We do not need to have gold nor can any thirst for knowledge be useful, unless it can serve to benefit others. Great thoughts in your poem about what we truly need!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Sounds like a healthy mind and spirit! We do not need to have gold nor can any thirst for knowledge be useful, unless it can serve to benefit others. Great thoughts in your poem about what we truly need!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Helen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Love the flow of rhymes here as we offer our strength to help others who may be weak and vulnerable. A fine poem Bill, there are some heroes left in life, love Dolly x x
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Love the flow of rhymes here as we offer our strength to help others who may be weak and vulnerable. A fine poem Bill, there are some heroes left in life, love Dolly x x
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Dolly. You are one of my champions. You create and expand within the poetic field with heroic flair.
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Wow Bill, I am so honoured by your kind words, love Dolly x
Comment from BethShelby
Spoken like a true Marine. This is a nicely rhymed poem. So what you saying is what we need is strength, sneaky movements and the nerve to act without fear.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Spoken like a true Marine. This is a nicely rhymed poem. So what you saying is what we need is strength, sneaky movements and the nerve to act without fear.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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It's that or wisdom.
Comment from QC Poet
Hello Mr Schott with age and sickness as
my situation is now I've been more conservative of all three or I should say slowly losing all thre of them LOL
Always enjoy coming across your poetic flair Blessings to you and yours
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Hello Mr Schott with age and sickness as
my situation is now I've been more conservative of all three or I should say slowly losing all thre of them LOL
Always enjoy coming across your poetic flair Blessings to you and yours
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, QC, for giving this a look,
Comment from jim vecchio
I agree with your little work, but also acknowledge all we have stems from The Lord. You are very adept at your messages with minimal word usage. Looking forward to more!
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I agree with your little work, but also acknowledge all we have stems from The Lord. You are very adept at your messages with minimal word usage. Looking forward to more!
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Jim
Comment from Iza Deleanu
excellent four liner, what can I add without killing the beauty of your poem... I guess nothing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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excellent four liner, what can I add without killing the beauty of your poem... I guess nothing. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Iza
Comment from nomi338
Hey, that sounds like it should be a creed of a military man. If it is not yet, it definitely should be. Just reading it, inspires me to try to be a better man. I may never achieve that goal, but I can surely try. This post inspires me.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Hey, that sounds like it should be a creed of a military man. If it is not yet, it definitely should be. Just reading it, inspires me to try to be a better man. I may never achieve that goal, but I can surely try. This post inspires me.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, nomi
Comment from juliaSjames
I like this single stanza rhymed offering, Bill. We all need very little but our desires soar to the clouds. And why not, when the sky's the limit for our imaginative, creative human personalities? I sense more than a touch of the marine in the final line. But of course, we all use these attributes to some extent in our daily lives. Even if we're not crawling through the jungle on patrol, we exist in a world where we need the strength and courage to face challenges.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I like this single stanza rhymed offering, Bill. We all need very little but our desires soar to the clouds. And why not, when the sky's the limit for our imaginative, creative human personalities? I sense more than a touch of the marine in the final line. But of course, we all use these attributes to some extent in our daily lives. Even if we're not crawling through the jungle on patrol, we exist in a world where we need the strength and courage to face challenges.
Thanks for sharing
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Julia
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very neat and well written poem about need. You used very good descriptive words that are so full of the truth to me. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Bill, This is a very neat and well written poem about need. You used very good descriptive words that are so full of the truth to me. Thank you for sharing. blessings, Teri
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Teri