Farewell my love to thee
Saying goodbye.38 total reviews
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your poetry of love, hope and anticipation always gives me a warm glowing feeling. Your words are always comforting and heartfelt, expressing joy and love. Best wishes in the contest.
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Your poetry of love, hope and anticipation always gives me a warm glowing feeling. Your words are always comforting and heartfelt, expressing joy and love. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from nancyjam
This is a beautiful farewell to your love. It is sad but full of hope and faith
that you will see her again, which is always comforting.Your thoughts are expressed with tenderness and lovely rhyme.
I'm sorry for your loss,
Nancy
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This is a beautiful farewell to your love. It is sad but full of hope and faith
that you will see her again, which is always comforting.Your thoughts are expressed with tenderness and lovely rhyme.
I'm sorry for your loss,
Nancy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from pome lover
Well, you got an All Time Best, so the top didn't need to be shorter. Congratulations!
I'm thinking this is real and not fiction, and if so, I am sorry for your loss.
It is a sweet poem about true love and sadness, well written.
Katharine
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Well, you got an All Time Best, so the top didn't need to be shorter. Congratulations!
I'm thinking this is real and not fiction, and if so, I am sorry for your loss.
It is a sweet poem about true love and sadness, well written.
Katharine
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Verse Poetry Contest.
The contest requires free verse but your poem rhymes, you will be disqualified if you don't change it. The poem is so beautiful the way it is. It overflows with love. I believe you will meet her one day.
You could copy the poem for another post, you just have to change the title. Then I would write a free verse for the contest. Just an idea.
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Excellent entry for the Verse Poetry Contest.
The contest requires free verse but your poem rhymes, you will be disqualified if you don't change it. The poem is so beautiful the way it is. It overflows with love. I believe you will meet her one day.
You could copy the poem for another post, you just have to change the title. Then I would write a free verse for the contest. Just an idea.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A very nice quote and poem to go with it, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
- You wrote a good tribute for your wife.
-A very good first verse about the loss of your wife.
-Your words touch the heart as you talk about
her waiting for you, whenever that may be.
-You do a good job showing how it has
impacted you with the repeating lines
about the angel taking her as well as
"Farewell my love to thee."
-I think she would be very pleased you wrote this.
-As far as a large picture, if you have Paint
on your computer or a program for pictures,
like Microsoft Picture Manager, you can
crop and resize pictures in both of those programs.
Make sure you save it by calling it quote picture A
or something similar. Hope that helps.
-A good entry for the contest; good luck!!
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-A very nice quote and poem to go with it, Willie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
- You wrote a good tribute for your wife.
-A very good first verse about the loss of your wife.
-Your words touch the heart as you talk about
her waiting for you, whenever that may be.
-You do a good job showing how it has
impacted you with the repeating lines
about the angel taking her as well as
"Farewell my love to thee."
-I think she would be very pleased you wrote this.
-As far as a large picture, if you have Paint
on your computer or a program for pictures,
like Microsoft Picture Manager, you can
crop and resize pictures in both of those programs.
Make sure you save it by calling it quote picture A
or something similar. Hope that helps.
-A good entry for the contest; good luck!!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from Neonewman
What a great entry this is for the free verse writing prompt. You are correct, you will meet again. This is the one thing that brings solace to me as well.
God bless,
Steve
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What a great entry this is for the free verse writing prompt. You are correct, you will meet again. This is the one thing that brings solace to me as well.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from bhogg
A nice post. Beautifully written and presented with an easy-to-read rhyme scheme. Hopefully, not written due to current events in your life. Bill
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A nice post. Beautifully written and presented with an easy-to-read rhyme scheme. Hopefully, not written due to current events in your life. Bill
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful and poignant post. Very moving, and obviously straight from the heart. You wrote this so smoothly and well in terms of poetic techniques as well. Very well done.
Wendy
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Beautiful and poignant post. Very moving, and obviously straight from the heart. You wrote this so smoothly and well in terms of poetic techniques as well. Very well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author,
Your poignant poem is very touching, especially for those of us, myself included, who has lost a true love.
Your rhyme is perfect; excellent if set to lyrics.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
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Author,
Your poignant poem is very touching, especially for those of us, myself included, who has lost a true love.
Your rhyme is perfect; excellent if set to lyrics.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from artisart4u
Psychologically, it is hard to say goodbye. Saying goodbye means that you have removed or are removing a thought that is precious to you. I know I still wear my wedding ring and I have been divorce for over 40 years. Those warm thoughts keeps you going.
Your couplets are nice and congratulations on being Recognized.
Good luck with your poem.
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Psychologically, it is hard to say goodbye. Saying goodbye means that you have removed or are removing a thought that is precious to you. I know I still wear my wedding ring and I have been divorce for over 40 years. Those warm thoughts keeps you going.
Your couplets are nice and congratulations on being Recognized.
Good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024