The Unwilling Heir
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Comment from karenina
This is precisely what I thought! If they dawdle and bicker they are succumbing to the very thing the evil ones want...
Good on Benny for apologizing!
They do not need more discord.
Oh my.
A moss covered book...but not the book I'm guessing.
I must run and squeeze in the next chapter!
You're writing better than ever!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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This is precisely what I thought! If they dawdle and bicker they are succumbing to the very thing the evil ones want...
Good on Benny for apologizing!
They do not need more discord.
Oh my.
A moss covered book...but not the book I'm guessing.
I must run and squeeze in the next chapter!
You're writing better than ever!
Karenina
Comment Written 26-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thanks for the comment. I do love this story NOW.... not so much in the beginning but it's definitely grown on me. As for the book, I thought of it as the original...one William had but let his grandson color in it after words because paper was scarce. It will have much of the information in it and could help.
On to the next chapter.... I always wanted to write that....LOL
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Oh... Right! I'll be looking for that now!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It seems as if they all are, at least at this time, willing to work together to save their own immortal souls. Having Billly arrive at the end waving the book it a good cliffhanger.
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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It seems as if they all are, at least at this time, willing to work together to save their own immortal souls. Having Billly arrive at the end waving the book it a good cliffhanger.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Carol. If they don't work together to solve this predicament, they will most likely succumb to the demons. Glad you enjoyed!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Like a needle in a haystack, things just always to appear when we think finding them is hopeless. But then, they always seem to get lost again. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Like a needle in a haystack, things just always to appear when we think finding them is hopeless. But then, they always seem to get lost again. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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As you see, I fell behind yesterday because I was writing those two chapters. But my thanks to you for continuing to follow the story is still sincere.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
What a chapter! I hope William is now aware of Esther's faithful love and can respond a little more. Have Will and Billy found the important book? Let's hope so, and that wrongs can be righted. Well written chapter.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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What a chapter! I hope William is now aware of Esther's faithful love and can respond a little more. Have Will and Billy found the important book? Let's hope so, and that wrongs can be righted. Well written chapter.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much, Wendy. So much is happening in the next few chapters, but I, too, hope that William and Esther find what she gave up so long ago. I like happy endings.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Well, I'm glad that Benny apologized - that's good that he could take that step in changing his attitude. I hope that William and Esther can get to the right people soon. Or that Sebastian knows where to find them.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Well, I'm glad that Benny apologized - that's good that he could take that step in changing his attitude. I hope that William and Esther can get to the right people soon. Or that Sebastian knows where to find them.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Falling behind on the reviews again. Wrote two chapters and got too wrapped up in the story yesterday. Thanks so much for continuing to read and enjoy the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
I'm glad William woke up enough to tell Esther not to cry. This could give Esther hope for the future. I'm also glad to hear from Sandra. Could Billy and Will have found the book? We'll see.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I'm glad William woke up enough to tell Esther not to cry. This could give Esther hope for the future. I'm also glad to hear from Sandra. Could Billy and Will have found the book? We'll see.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Hmmm. they found something but is it enough to find the treasure and return it to the rightful owners in order to receive redemption? And what are those evil spirits planning? Will they try to stop them of achieving their goals? So many questions..... Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
It must be interesting and mind changing for the ghosts of the past to still be reconciling themselves with their forever love, of course I don't think that it will be happening after death, but reconciliation with God must heal old wounds, but it nice to think that it would be possible, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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It must be interesting and mind changing for the ghosts of the past to still be reconciling themselves with their forever love, of course I don't think that it will be happening after death, but reconciliation with God must heal old wounds, but it nice to think that it would be possible, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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It's a good thing I write fiction; I can imagine how I want my world to be. LOL, I want them all to be happy, something that doesn't always happen here on Earth. Thanks so much, Roy!
Smiles, Carol
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Yes at least we can write down our dreams...one day?!?
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That's where Esther went and it looks like she has managed to get William out from under! And what have Billy and Will found?? I now have to wait until we come into town again! This is an amazing story, my dear friend. Love and hugs!! Xxxxx Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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That's where Esther went and it looks like she has managed to get William out from under! And what have Billy and Will found?? I now have to wait until we come into town again! This is an amazing story, my dear friend. Love and hugs!! Xxxxx Sandra xxx
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much, Sandra. And congratulations on winning Book of the Month. You deserve it! Enjoy your vacation and thanks for thinking of me. You are always in my thoughts. And thanks for sharing your gold stars!
Smiles and hugs and love as always, Carol
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Oh, I didn?t see that! How nice that people voted for my book! ;)) xxx
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Of course they did and I was first in line. LOL Love ya...Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Possibly finding the book, or a book that will be helpful. I enjoyed reading, as I always do. I am glad they've decided to work as a team. This will probably be a good thing.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Possibly finding the book, or a book that will be helpful. I enjoyed reading, as I always do. I am glad they've decided to work as a team. This will probably be a good thing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I'm glad they decided to work together as well. The next chapter will need all their expertise and thoughts, I think. Thank you as always, Barbara, for enjoying the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from prettybluebirds
You ended this chapter with a spectacular reveal. Now, I have to wait for the next chapter to find out what it is. This is still your best story by far. You have taken ghost stories to a new dimension.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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You ended this chapter with a spectacular reveal. Now, I have to wait for the next chapter to find out what it is. This is still your best story by far. You have taken ghost stories to a new dimension.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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I am amazed when you tell me that the story is the best I've written. My heart swells with your praise. Thank you! I'm writing Chap 30 but I think it might be Sunday when I post. I have to earn some more $$. Thanks as always!
Smiles, Carol