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Peace

a 1-6-1

8 total reviews 
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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This is such a cute picture. Love the sheep. The poem rhymes well. Maybe someday we will have peace. The way it looks now, seems as though there is going to be a war. Very good job.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Peace comes when we sleep. When we are awake, the world burns.
Comment from Nicki.B
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This is such a cute poem! We get so much gifts from the animals around us, from pillows to sweaters! I love the image it brings fun and cuteness. Well done

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Nicola
Comment from zaraduck6
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Wow...wonderful 1-6-1 poem. I love the farm vibe, as well as the rhyme scheme. Also, the photo is very cheery and cute and fun. Well done! Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 08-Jun-2024
    Thank you, ZD
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Wonderful entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt contest.

Excellent presentation and word imagery.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thanks, Gypsy
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the contest. You used great descriptive words that rhymed and very lovely imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. teri

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thanks, Teri
Comment from Barry Penfold
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This is very clever. Appears to meet all of the competition requirements. Love the image. Thanks for sharing and I wish you all the best in the competition. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Cheers
Barry Penfold.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Barry
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I loved this entry for the 1-6-1 writing prompt. Very original in a difficult poetry format. I also adored the image you chose for the presentation. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Thank you, Marilyn
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
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Fleece

from lambs and down from geese.

Peace.

How fun!!! Not sure if there is any peace to be found around geese though!! Haha. Very cute overall though in the graphic goes well

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2024

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
    Found a picture of a lamb and a goose -- so...