Lost then Found
A mono-rhyme poem8 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Exceptional entry for the Mono-rhyme writing prompt Contest. I wonder who the girl is.
I love the imagery in your poem. Good rhyming that doesn't sound forced and flows nicely.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Exceptional entry for the Mono-rhyme writing prompt Contest. I wonder who the girl is.
I love the imagery in your poem. Good rhyming that doesn't sound forced and flows nicely.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Boogienights
I think this is a very good mono rhyme for the contest. These are not easy to do and also make sense. I completely understand your poem, it really touched my heart. Thanks for sharing.
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I think this is a very good mono rhyme for the contest. These are not easy to do and also make sense. I completely understand your poem, it really touched my heart. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem elicits deep emotions and hope. It is an inspirational piece that reminds one that the Lord has our back even when surrounded by the gravest of difficulties. Thanks for sharing your work, and good luck in the contest. Well done.
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The poem elicits deep emotions and hope. It is an inspirational piece that reminds one that the Lord has our back even when surrounded by the gravest of difficulties. Thanks for sharing your work, and good luck in the contest. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Mystery Poet,
You have a monorhyme poem about a girl who seems to be engulfed in depression of some sort. We don't know what caused it, but it's there and that's all that matters. The girl considers throwing herself in the ocean, but changes her mind when she feels God's presence and power to help her overcome.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi Mystery Poet,
You have a monorhyme poem about a girl who seems to be engulfed in depression of some sort. We don't know what caused it, but it's there and that's all that matters. The girl considers throwing herself in the ocean, but changes her mind when she feels God's presence and power to help her overcome.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from royowen
Mono rhyme can be a little tricky when tackled, particularly when it's the same sounding last word, but well done, I frequently write mixed rhyme poetry, but that is likewise tricky, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Mono rhyme can be a little tricky when tackled, particularly when it's the same sounding last word, but well done, I frequently write mixed rhyme poetry, but that is likewise tricky, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much
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Most welcome
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This certainly is a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Was that God talking about the hands around life's throat? I think it is.
This sounds to me like somebody approaching death. Pardon me if I'm wrong.
The entire poem becomes clear
This is a better entry to the contest than most I've seen. I don't know how you guys rhyme so many lines.. I'm a pretty good rhymer, but I wouldn't want to tackle that.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Hi
This certainly is a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Was that God talking about the hands around life's throat? I think it is.
This sounds to me like somebody approaching death. Pardon me if I'm wrong.
The entire poem becomes clear
This is a better entry to the contest than most I've seen. I don't know how you guys rhyme so many lines.. I'm a pretty good rhymer, but I wouldn't want to tackle that.
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
a girl here sits no life to quote
to loneliness she must devote
the outside world has stamped her note
that cast her far in drifting boat
Lovely. All the best going forward with your work.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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a girl here sits no life to quote
to loneliness she must devote
the outside world has stamped her note
that cast her far in drifting boat
Lovely. All the best going forward with your work.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Bill Schott
This monorhyme, Lost Then Found, has the proper formatting and seems to follow the person who has been struck down in life for a bit but is on the way to recovering what she had.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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This monorhyme, Lost Then Found, has the proper formatting and seems to follow the person who has been struck down in life for a bit but is on the way to recovering what she had.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much