Worth the Ride
100 words6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I know the feeling! That's true love. And I only hope she said 'yes.' Your flash fiction is well structured in this limited format and provides a nice, unexpected twist at the end. Just one small edit: j(ust) to compose..
Well done and good luck! Debbie
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I know the feeling! That's true love. And I only hope she said 'yes.' Your flash fiction is well structured in this limited format and provides a nice, unexpected twist at the end. Just one small edit: j(ust) to compose..
Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Mia Twysted
That is such a cute little story. It gives you a whole other reason for him to be on that ride. I loved how you played on the phrase "She was worth the ride."
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That is such a cute little story. It gives you a whole other reason for him to be on that ride. I loved how you played on the phrase "She was worth the ride."
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Worth the Ride, has the proper word count and finds how much a man will do to secure the answer of whether or not his girlfriend will be his wife. Funny.
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This one-hundred-word story, Worth the Ride, has the proper word count and finds how much a man will do to secure the answer of whether or not his girlfriend will be his wife. Funny.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
LOL I doubt I could have passed that particular test as a prerequisite for getting married. I wouldn't have just been green...no further description is needed except where's the closest bathroom? Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
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LOL I doubt I could have passed that particular test as a prerequisite for getting married. I wouldn't have just been green...no further description is needed except where's the closest bathroom? Good luck in the contest.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was adorable! I like the story, and you told it well in just one hundred words. I'm glad she was worth the ride! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This was adorable! I like the story, and you told it well in just one hundred words. I'm glad she was worth the ride! Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
My stomach had been flipped upside down and I could only imagine how green I looked. Scanning the watching crowd I spotted her with an anxious look on her face.
I definitely feel this as roller coaster they're not kind to me.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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My stomach had been flipped upside down and I could only imagine how green I looked. Scanning the watching crowd I spotted her with an anxious look on her face.
I definitely feel this as roller coaster they're not kind to me.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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You and me both. I hate them.
Thanks for your review and welcome to Fanstory.