Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from Nicole Schmidt
Ron : Listen to this moron. He doesn't know his butt from a butter churn.
I'm not entirely sure why but I did laugh when I read this. You did a good job with the dialogue in this I very much enjoyed it from the start to the finish. Best of luck going forward.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Ron : Listen to this moron. He doesn't know his butt from a butter churn.
I'm not entirely sure why but I did laugh when I read this. You did a good job with the dialogue in this I very much enjoyed it from the start to the finish. Best of luck going forward.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Nicole. I was going to use the old saw ?ass from a hole in the ground. but I wanted to avoid being crude and experiment with some phrases.
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I think you made the right choice!!
Comment from BethShelby
Your scripts are so funny. I love you play on words. I love the names Ron Rump and Job By-then. I think Ned had the funny line. "If it's row or wade, I'd say dog paddle."
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Your scripts are so funny. I love you play on words. I love the names Ron Rump and Job By-then. I think Ned had the funny line. "If it's row or wade, I'd say dog paddle."
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Beth. I'm struggling to be funnier than the reality before us.
Comment from Scarbrems
Ha ha. This made me giggle. Love the back and forth about crazy aunts and churning butter.
Pretty much nailed the political landscape, here. Thanks for the morning chuckle.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Ha ha. This made me giggle. Love the back and forth about crazy aunts and churning butter.
Pretty much nailed the political landscape, here. Thanks for the morning chuckle.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Scarbrems, for giving this a look.
Comment from judiverse
Does Cabala get to say anything? Funny political stuff. I especially liked the line about Roe V Wade with Ned saying, "If its row or wade, I'd say dog paddle." Great observations on the comments that ByThen and Rump are true to form. Great work. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Does Cabala get to say anything? Funny political stuff. I especially liked the line about Roe V Wade with Ned saying, "If its row or wade, I'd say dog paddle." Great observations on the comments that ByThen and Rump are true to form. Great work. judi
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Between the oversold felon and the undersold ancient politician, I can see a glimmer of hope for young Ned and his churn.
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Ned might be the one to save the day! We need saving. Hope you're doing all right this Sunday. judi
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Attended my granddaughter's high school graduation yesterday and am priming for a day with the eight, seven, and five-year-olds today.
Comment from nomi338
Whoa there Bucko. You are hitting very close to hitting the nail on its head several times. Your hits are so direct that the nail is nearly all the way in. So much so, that some people might be starting to feel just a little bit uncomfortable.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Whoa there Bucko. You are hitting very close to hitting the nail on its head several times. Your hits are so direct that the nail is nearly all the way in. So much so, that some people might be starting to feel just a little bit uncomfortable.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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We're getting real people!
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Uncomfortably true.
Comment from jim vecchio
If Cabela did become president, I wonder who would be her ghosting president? If Rump goes to Riker's Island, will that become the Eastern White House? And where would the Secret Service sleep?
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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If Cabela did become president, I wonder who would be her ghosting president? If Rump goes to Riker's Island, will that become the Eastern White House? And where would the Secret Service sleep?
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Big Bed for the Predsodent.
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Will they be allowed to have cell phones?
Comment from lyenochka
I liked your jabs given the latest 34 "Guilty" verdicts. I just wish that the GOP will finally wake up and try to save their reputation. But maybe that's impossible now.
Someone like Ned would be a refreshing change. We know most of the presidents in the last 40 years had their staff do all the work...didn't they?
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I liked your jabs given the latest 34 "Guilty" verdicts. I just wish that the GOP will finally wake up and try to save their reputation. But maybe that's impossible now.
Someone like Ned would be a refreshing change. We know most of the presidents in the last 40 years had their staff do all the work...didn't they?
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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The government had reached a political impasse in Congress, so an "outsider" idea became popular. Now we have the result, Trump, the least qualified with a taste of the "Evil Office" and a horde of ne'er-do-wells virtually crawling all over the Capitol.
Comment from royowen
I love the names of President Bythen, and Ronald Rump, the world looks on in amazement, with two decidedly old men with problems, not much.of a choice, and you've done a smack up job of making circumstances humorous Bill, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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I love the names of President Bythen, and Ronald Rump, the world looks on in amazement, with two decidedly old men with problems, not much.of a choice, and you've done a smack up job of making circumstances humorous Bill, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Roy
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Welcome Bill
Comment from kahpot
Yep, I really like this one, along with the wonderful lingo, you have covered some important topics and told what you/they think of "Rump" an excellent read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Yep, I really like this one, along with the wonderful lingo, you have covered some important topics and told what you/they think of "Rump" an excellent read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you, kahpot