Sam Dick
Sam DIck FInds Out His Dad is a real Dick!2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought your writing did a wonderful job of weaving together personal history and humor. I was captivated by Mary's larger than life personality and the crazy twists of fate that shape Sam's journey Loved the ending - that was so funny. Great job.
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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I thought your writing did a wonderful job of weaving together personal history and humor. I was captivated by Mary's larger than life personality and the crazy twists of fate that shape Sam's journey Loved the ending - that was so funny. Great job.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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thanks as always
Comment from Dr. Nad
Thanks for writing this surprising story concerning Sam and his shocking news. You have been able to create a line of thought that follows consecutively and coherently through to the surprising end. Good job.
Below are two consecutive sentences that you might want to revisit. You might want to consider creating four or five sentences rather than two. (Then again, you might not want to revisit them. Lol.ð???)
"She had fled to the Bay Area during the Dust Bowl as part of the Okie invasion of the Bay Area during the late 30s when her family farm fell apart during the dust bowl conditions. Her family was part of the so-called lost tribe of the Cherokee nation, part African American, Cherokee, Creek, Chow tow, French, Dutch, Italian, and Seminole, often referred to as the black Irish due to their dark complexion, but passed as "white" in the racist code of the South."
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thanks for writing this surprising story concerning Sam and his shocking news. You have been able to create a line of thought that follows consecutively and coherently through to the surprising end. Good job.
Below are two consecutive sentences that you might want to revisit. You might want to consider creating four or five sentences rather than two. (Then again, you might not want to revisit them. Lol.ð???)
"She had fled to the Bay Area during the Dust Bowl as part of the Okie invasion of the Bay Area during the late 30s when her family farm fell apart during the dust bowl conditions. Her family was part of the so-called lost tribe of the Cherokee nation, part African American, Cherokee, Creek, Chow tow, French, Dutch, Italian, and Seminole, often referred to as the black Irish due to their dark complexion, but passed as "white" in the racist code of the South."
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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thanks a lot
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You, mystery person, are most welcome, embrace the love from above.