The Saga of Procrastination
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5 total reviews
Comment from Brad Bennett
Hi Iza.
Very creative story and well-presented. I enjoyed it!
I used to write a lot on this site but I only check it occasionally now to find a few gems. I'm a retired artist now living with my wife down in Oliver BC.
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Hi Iza.
Very creative story and well-presented. I enjoyed it!
I used to write a lot on this site but I only check it occasionally now to find a few gems. I'm a retired artist now living with my wife down in Oliver BC.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, I don't know how much Jumanji is going to help the two in smothered in sand, to be trampled by a huge assortment of stampeding animals. But who knows, everything else might be crushed but them. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Well, I don't know how much Jumanji is going to help the two in smothered in sand, to be trampled by a huge assortment of stampeding animals. But who knows, everything else might be crushed but them. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
Comment from Begin Again
How frightful, Iza. Being stuck in an hourglass and covered with sand... Your imagination is running away with you. Go dig your toes in the sand by the water and take a deep breath..Relax.
Smiles, Carol
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How frightful, Iza. Being stuck in an hourglass and covered with sand... Your imagination is running away with you. Go dig your toes in the sand by the water and take a deep breath..Relax.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 29-May-2024
Comment from lyenochka
I know the movie. I liked the second one better than the first. So the giant is Jumanji? I thought they had several lives and could return up to three times. It sounds like they left a bad situation and got into a worse one. Best wishes in the contest!
Ellaine took his hand and tried to distract him. (Elaine)
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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I know the movie. I liked the second one better than the first. So the giant is Jumanji? I thought they had several lives and could return up to three times. It sounds like they left a bad situation and got into a worse one. Best wishes in the contest!
Ellaine took his hand and tried to distract him. (Elaine)
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Hi Helen, I just used that Jumanji for fun, I tried to make it more interesting but the story is not based on the movie, and I agree with you, the second was the nicer one.
Comment from Sallyo
Oooh boy! Trying to improve their situation made it an awful lot worse. I'm assuming Jumanji refers to the film series though I don't remember it well. Great dystopia.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Oooh boy! Trying to improve their situation made it an awful lot worse. I'm assuming Jumanji refers to the film series though I don't remember it well. Great dystopia.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you so much for reading my story:) you should watch the second one:)