Watching Hummingbirds
A contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from Jill D
I wish we had hummingbirds this side of the water, they're so pretty.
You can be sure you're memory of that day can recall the sights and sounds far more vividly than a photo ever could.
A beautiful memory!
All the best.
Jill:)
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
I wish we had hummingbirds this side of the water, they're so pretty.
You can be sure you're memory of that day can recall the sights and sounds far more vividly than a photo ever could.
A beautiful memory!
All the best.
Jill:)
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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Thank you for stopping by. Reviewed my work and leaving such a nice comment. I?m wearing birds are indeed very much fun to watch.
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You're welcome:)
Comment from judiverse
I'm no good with the digital cameras, but I can understand why you'd want to capture the moment. The bird perching on your husband's shoulder would have made a wonderful picture. At least you can treasure and remember the moment. Hummingbirds are so sweet. I have a new hummingbird feeder but haven't seen many around it yet, Beautifully described, and good luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
I'm no good with the digital cameras, but I can understand why you'd want to capture the moment. The bird perching on your husband's shoulder would have made a wonderful picture. At least you can treasure and remember the moment. Hummingbirds are so sweet. I have a new hummingbird feeder but haven't seen many around it yet, Beautifully described, and good luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you so very much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
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You're very welcome. judi
Comment from zanya
What a beautiful, personal and family memory like a scene engraved in the best place of all, in memory. These are the fleeting moments that give us such joy on recalling them.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
What a beautiful, personal and family memory like a scene engraved in the best place of all, in memory. These are the fleeting moments that give us such joy on recalling them.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate it. I am glad you enjoyed this story. Period
Comment from Wendy G
Lovely flash for the contest. You wrote it succinctly and well, sharing these very special memories of the hummingbirds and your husband. Sending you best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Lovely flash for the contest. You wrote it succinctly and well, sharing these very special memories of the hummingbirds and your husband. Sending you best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work and leaving such a nice review. I am happy that you enjoyed my story.
Comment from Aiona
What a sweet story! And one I relate with. It didn't always used to be that way though, for me. That feeling of "Dang! I wish I had my camera." It's happened a few times, when I wish I'd gotten my camera out. One was when a humpback whale was less than 50 feet in front of my kayak. I didn't get it out, because I knew I'd probably drop my phone in the water. But it was so cool nonetheless. Turns out my friend who was with me in her kayak got HER phone wet trying to get a picture, and then MISSED the picture. Awful. So I guess I made the right decision. All those moments, that only reside now in our internal hard-drive. LOL!
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
What a sweet story! And one I relate with. It didn't always used to be that way though, for me. That feeling of "Dang! I wish I had my camera." It's happened a few times, when I wish I'd gotten my camera out. One was when a humpback whale was less than 50 feet in front of my kayak. I didn't get it out, because I knew I'd probably drop my phone in the water. But it was so cool nonetheless. Turns out my friend who was with me in her kayak got HER phone wet trying to get a picture, and then MISSED the picture. Awful. So I guess I made the right decision. All those moments, that only reside now in our internal hard-drive. LOL!
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. Also thank you for your own personal story that you shared with me.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Pat, this is such a sweet and endearing story. Hummingbirds are just delightful. I think that they make everyone smile. You didn't have a camera to capture the moment, but the memory will remain with you forevermore. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Hi Pat, this is such a sweet and endearing story. Hummingbirds are just delightful. I think that they make everyone smile. You didn't have a camera to capture the moment, but the memory will remain with you forevermore. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work and leaving such a nice reply.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. While I was at my mom's a hummingbird would come to the feeder even when we were right beside it. I was amazed. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. While I was at my mom's a hummingbird would come to the feeder even when we were right beside it. I was amazed. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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I am always grateful when I get stressed. Nice review is this thank you so much.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Wow! That's so sweet! That hummingbird must have sensed your husband was good. This memory makes my day, Patricia! On this day of remembering, it's a good day to remember all of the good people who have left memories that can still be shared. The writing and photo matched perfectly. Just like You & You're Husband. U did see the photo you shared. With love, Alexandra:)x
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
Wow! That's so sweet! That hummingbird must have sensed your husband was good. This memory makes my day, Patricia! On this day of remembering, it's a good day to remember all of the good people who have left memories that can still be shared. The writing and photo matched perfectly. Just like You & You're Husband. U did see the photo you shared. With love, Alexandra:)x
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you so very much for your kind review. I appreciate your kind words. Have a good evening and a good week. Patricia .
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You're welcome, Patricia! Have a good evening and good week, too. 😊
Comment from Teri7
Patricia, This is a very well written True Story Flash. I bet that was a very sweet moment in time for you and your husband. That little bird saw that nice red hat. Very nice imagery to go with your words. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
Patricia, This is a very well written True Story Flash. I bet that was a very sweet moment in time for you and your husband. That little bird saw that nice red hat. Very nice imagery to go with your words. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it greatly.
Comment from lyenochka
I remember that scene. I think you told us this before. The red and pink colors are the favorite of the hummingbirds. I guess that hummingbird thought your husband was the biggest flower he'd ever seen! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
I remember that scene. I think you told us this before. The red and pink colors are the favorite of the hummingbirds. I guess that hummingbird thought your husband was the biggest flower he'd ever seen! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I did not write a story about the hummingbird in him at my husband?s cap, but I did mention it to you or someone review reply. That?s where you may have picked up that the story.
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Oh, that's probably why it's familiar! 😊😻