A Long Time Ago
Playing baseball in high school.4 total reviews
Comment from Lindsey Pabst
Hi HarryT, I wanted to say how much I loved your nonet poem. I also entered the contest and when I read all the other entries I thought many were very good but yours struck me the most. I could really imagine looking at my hands and remembering how different they used to be and how I took them for granted. Really well done. And I love the photo you chose as well.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Hi HarryT, I wanted to say how much I loved your nonet poem. I also entered the contest and when I read all the other entries I thought many were very good but yours struck me the most. I could really imagine looking at my hands and remembering how different they used to be and how I took them for granted. Really well done. And I love the photo you chose as well.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you again for your encouraging review. So pleased you liked it.
Comment from zanya
An interesting reflection here in this Nonet on the effect of time and ageing on our lives and how it changes our bodies too - an appropriate pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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An interesting reflection here in this Nonet on the effect of time and ageing on our lives and how it changes our bodies too - an appropriate pic to illustrate
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and provide comment.
Comment from RodG
Your poem brings back memories of my own youth and playing baseball. I was a pitcher. Today I'd bounce the ball to the plate. Your vivid description of that shortstop's toss to first puts us there. Rod
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Your poem brings back memories of my own youth and playing baseball. I was a pitcher. Today I'd bounce the ball to the plate. Your vivid description of that shortstop's toss to first puts us there. Rod
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thanks for the review and happy to share a memory.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I enjoyed reading this. ALOT of the things in here are things my grandfather also said. There is beauty to be found in aging but also sorrow. This touches on that very well.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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I enjoyed reading this. ALOT of the things in here are things my grandfather also said. There is beauty to be found in aging but also sorrow. This touches on that very well.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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What could I do to make it a five star effort?