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Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy the poem and the subject----it's like I always say, 'you can never go wrong with nudity, unless your in church or anywhere public, but as a subject...?'

 Comment Written 25-May-2024

reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    LoL

    thank you very much 😊 Mike

    gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the nude night overflowing with wishing stars!
a very sparkly and hopeful image

a great free verse with nice imagistic word choices and a smooth flow throughout...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 25-May-2024

reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    thank you very much 😊

    gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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There has always been something magical about the nude body of a woman. I though your words alluded to that by the various comparisons that can be drawn from them.
As a man, I am fascinated by the uniqueness of each woman and her ability to command attention through the slightest gesture.
RJ

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

reply by the author on 24-May-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy
Comment from Jumbo J
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Hi MariVal,
love the metaphors you chose to use. They actually created a deeper understanding than what the title suggests... and hey((((((, I do love 'nude', but I see and read the bare essentials to life's bounty and beauty.

Beautiful composition, presentation and delivery... thank you for bearing yourself so readily and unabashed.

With our thoughts we create...
mental images.

Warmest regards,
James.

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

reply by the author on 24-May-2024
    James! How are you? It's good to hear from you.

    You are always so kind to me and you really understand my poetry.

    It took a long time to create the presentation... but I had fun.

    Thank you, darling, may you have a wonderful weekend.

    Besitos y abrazos

    Marival
reply by Jumbo J on 24-May-2024
    MariVal(((((... I've been better... and well, I've been worse. So I guess it all evens out in the end. How are you my dear sweet friend?
    May your weekend be a breath of fresh air with a hint of rosemary, vanilla, lavender and patchouli.

    En mis pensamientos y oraciones siempre mi hermosa amiga!

    James.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    James, you chose my favorite scents ... how did you know? thank you very much 😊

    I have been better. I haven't slept well in quite a while and I have trouble maintaining my balance. I have an appointment with my doctor this month. Thank you for asking. I hope you feel better soon. I pray for you every night.

    tu tambien estas en mi pesamientos y oraciones.

    con mucho amor, amigo mio,

    marival

    gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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I guess there are many things in nature which are beautiful just as "nude" as they naturally appear. But of course, the nude human body is only for intimate ones to see!

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

reply by the author on 24-May-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister

    Love

    Marival
Comment from royowen
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I like the scripture which says ; naked I was born, and naked I will leave' heh heh, and as we age perhaps we have become a little less attractive, the ravages of time have got the best of us, well done, Gypsy, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-May-2024

reply by the author on 24-May-2024
    Thank you very much 😊
    May you have a wonderful weekend

    gypsy
reply by royowen on 24-May-2024
    You too