Where is the food ?
A rhyming story5 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery writer, you now have 10 votes!
I thought both entries were good but ultimately I gave you my vote because I preferred the plot.
The food being stolen and the three that go searching for the culprit ( in this case culprits)
I think next time you should highlight the words that rhyme.
Its a shame there were only two entries.
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Ciao mystery writer, you now have 10 votes!
I thought both entries were good but ultimately I gave you my vote because I preferred the plot.
The food being stolen and the three that go searching for the culprit ( in this case culprits)
I think next time you should highlight the words that rhyme.
Its a shame there were only two entries.
Comment Written 25-May-2024
reply by the author on 25-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Also thank you for voting for my writing.
With kind regards
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You are welcome! 😊
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I like what you've done here with your internal rhyme which fitted in very seamlessly. This is a fun story, ideal for children and fulfils the brief perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I like what you've done here with your internal rhyme which fitted in very seamlessly. This is a fun story, ideal for children and fulfils the brief perfectly. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written short rhyming story about a bear, a rabbit and a squirrel. You used very good descriptive words. You used good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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This is a very cute and well written short rhyming story about a bear, a rabbit and a squirrel. You used very good descriptive words. You used good imagery with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
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You are so welcome!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I know not of you nor you of me, but I can see your mentality is on par with mine as oft pictured in my Demented Series. And now you challenge other to join in the madness with an UPSIDE DOWN poem? Well done.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I know not of you nor you of me, but I can see your mentality is on par with mine as oft pictured in my Demented Series. And now you challenge other to join in the madness with an UPSIDE DOWN poem? Well done.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work
With kind regards
Comment from Tina Crute
I loved this. It had just enough rhyme to fit the bill but not be overdone. The storyline was friendly and creative and very relatable to all children
Well done!
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I loved this. It had just enough rhyme to fit the bill but not be overdone. The storyline was friendly and creative and very relatable to all children
Well done!
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work.
With kind regards
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You're welcome:)
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You're very welcome!