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The Songs in My Heart

Her love always put a song in my heart

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Comment from Esther Brown
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Love in poetry is so special to me. I hope there is a person receiving your offerings with joy. Seems like an alternate person to the profile being ex air force and JVD would represent to me. Esther

 Comment Written 24-May-2024


reply by the author on 25-May-2024
    Hmmmm!!!!!!!!! The person is inspired by someone who has become a muse some 30 years after the
    Air Force and about 4 years after working in Juvenile Detention.

    You are a very perception woman!

    My title for my poetry collection is Reflections, Observation, Admissions Denials.

    I will Reflect on lof things, Observe what is around me, Admit to some things, and some things I might vehemently Deny.

    All in all I hope the ready has fun and is moved trying to figure it out.

    Have a safe holiday weekend.
reply by Esther Brown on 26-May-2024
    You have a good weekend as well. We will ride the Harley once it warms up a bit. Not even 40 yet.
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a deeply heartfelt and romantic poem of someone near and dear. I like the repetition from the first line and the last with the last one identifying what those love songs are. Beautifully done!
Julie

 Comment Written 22-May-2024


reply by the author on 23-May-2024
    Thank you so much.
    The basics of this poem started coming to my mind a few days ago. It does have significant meaning and she is beautiful sunshine in my life.
Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very nice poem that you have written and it expresses your love for someone very well. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best in the club event. Patricia .

 Comment Written 22-May-2024


reply by the author on 22-May-2024
    Thank you. I am so glad you find my efforts worthy. I sometimes get ideas that cross my mind while driving. If those thoughts stay with me, I try to act on them by writing.