Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "News From the Pacific"Young girl with special abilities.
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Somehow, I missed this one. Lester's aunt is a terrible human being, and it is impossible to believe she had any kind intent. Lester did the only thing he could do by going to Heddy's family.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Somehow, I missed this one. Lester's aunt is a terrible human being, and it is impossible to believe she had any kind intent. Lester did the only thing he could do by going to Heddy's family.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much. This was a hard chapter to write. Gretchen
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Losing his daddy would be enough to make a young child hysterical as Lester appeared to be.
In bad situations parents always want their children to "be strong." Sometimes, that is very difficult for them to do.
War takes its toll on everyone involved and in many ways.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Losing his daddy would be enough to make a young child hysterical as Lester appeared to be.
In bad situations parents always want their children to "be strong." Sometimes, that is very difficult for them to do.
War takes its toll on everyone involved and in many ways.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Brett, your comments are always appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
Sometimes, good down home food and the comfort of others is all we can hope for to help us through the hard times. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Sometimes, good down home food and the comfort of others is all we can hope for to help us through the hard times. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Ric. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Gretchen,
this should be a six, but you know how things go. You have a gift for telling a riveting story gal. I was heartbroken to hear about Lester's father. How many children down through the ages have had to deal with such heart wrenching news? Not just military members, so many police have lost their lives in the line of duty, especially in these past few years as society breaks down. What kind of sick person is Lester's aunt? Does she get pleasure in causing pain to others? She must have some serious baggage from her own past. This was just outstanding gal. I'm so sorry that I can't give it the award it deserves.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Hello Gretchen,
this should be a six, but you know how things go. You have a gift for telling a riveting story gal. I was heartbroken to hear about Lester's father. How many children down through the ages have had to deal with such heart wrenching news? Not just military members, so many police have lost their lives in the line of duty, especially in these past few years as society breaks down. What kind of sick person is Lester's aunt? Does she get pleasure in causing pain to others? She must have some serious baggage from her own past. This was just outstanding gal. I'm so sorry that I can't give it the award it deserves.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 24-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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I think Lester's aunt likes to control people. And, I'm pretty sure she just didn't want to deal with a grieving young boy. Thank you for this. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Thank God for Heddy's family. They are all so kind to Lester. Poor boy, what a horrible way to learn his father is dead. His aunt is a horrible woman. I'm hoping Heddy's family would adopt him but that would be weird for Heddy and Lester.
We'll just have to wait and see.
I'm amazed what a wonderful story teller.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank God for Heddy's family. They are all so kind to Lester. Poor boy, what a horrible way to learn his father is dead. His aunt is a horrible woman. I'm hoping Heddy's family would adopt him but that would be weird for Heddy and Lester.
We'll just have to wait and see.
I'm amazed what a wonderful story teller.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you for both this wonderful review and the six. Lester is only supposed to be on the island until the end of summer. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
Even though Lester's dad is killed at sea, there is something terrible about the news, but the fact that his aunt hid it from him is a little mean, but who knows what people's motives are, I don't understand some people, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Even though Lester's dad is killed at sea, there is something terrible about the news, but the fact that his aunt hid it from him is a little mean, but who knows what people's motives are, I don't understand some people, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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She just didn't want to deal with a grieving boy. I think with his aunt, it's all about control. Thank you for this. Gretchen
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Yes poor boy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You did a great withe Lester's emotions. I felt them. That's a sign of a good author. GREAT JOB!!!! Thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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You did a great withe Lester's emotions. I felt them. That's a sign of a good author. GREAT JOB!!!! Thank you for sharing this with us. I really enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, for both the wonderful review and the six. It was hard to write this chapter. I was his age when my father died. It's a tough age. Gretchen
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your opening setting is great at really gives the reader the sensory experience. This will immediately draw the reader in: "He looks at her and opens his mouth. He doesn't say anything, just lets a heart wrenching sob out. He all but collapses into her right then and there." this is a nice tribute to his father and to all service people: "Willis finally looks over at Lester, his own eyes red. "Lester, your daddy died a hero. Those navy men, they are some of the best. I'm sure your daddy was a hero, right to the end. You hear me, Lester? Be proud of that fact."
Distraction is great. They all did a good job with Lester. A great metaphor at the end with little juxtaposition thrown in. This is well written.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Your opening setting is great at really gives the reader the sensory experience. This will immediately draw the reader in: "He looks at her and opens his mouth. He doesn't say anything, just lets a heart wrenching sob out. He all but collapses into her right then and there." this is a nice tribute to his father and to all service people: "Willis finally looks over at Lester, his own eyes red. "Lester, your daddy died a hero. Those navy men, they are some of the best. I'm sure your daddy was a hero, right to the end. You hear me, Lester? Be proud of that fact."
Distraction is great. They all did a good job with Lester. A great metaphor at the end with little juxtaposition thrown in. This is well written.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Gretchen
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A great book
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aww, that poor boy! I suppose his aunt thought she was protecting him?? I don't know, she's not exactly a kind lady. Perhaps she was scared she would lose her cheap help? But he should have been told. I wonder what she will say when he goes back to her. If there is a place to go back to. This was a sad chapter in this story, Gretchen, but it happened to so many men, destroying so many families. So well written, my friend, a virtual six. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Aww, that poor boy! I suppose his aunt thought she was protecting him?? I don't know, she's not exactly a kind lady. Perhaps she was scared she would lose her cheap help? But he should have been told. I wonder what she will say when he goes back to her. If there is a place to go back to. This was a sad chapter in this story, Gretchen, but it happened to so many men, destroying so many families. So well written, my friend, a virtual six. Warmest hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Sandra. I think she just didn't want to deal with a grieving child. She's definitely not the type to think about what's best for others. Gretchen
Comment from BethShelby
All wars were terrible. WWII was a hrrible war because so many died. I remember kids who lost their dads in that war. Lester aunt shouldn't be hiding mail. Of course he would have be just as sad two weeks ago when the letter came. Your story is great. I like the grandma who only Heddy can see.
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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All wars were terrible. WWII was a hrrible war because so many died. I remember kids who lost their dads in that war. Lester aunt shouldn't be hiding mail. Of course he would have be just as sad two weeks ago when the letter came. Your story is great. I like the grandma who only Heddy can see.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 24-May-2024
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Thank you, Beth, for both the wonderful review and the six. I appreciate your kindness. Gretchen
