The Interloper
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
OMG! How is Miriam going to get out of there? And I expect the other 'prisoners' aren't really suposed to be there either. Gunther must be brought down, but how, and by whom, I haven't a clue!! I'm hoping Angie can come up with something, know someone? It would have to be someone who had more authority than Gunther. Well, Joan, this is one heck of a chapter, very well done. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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OMG! How is Miriam going to get out of there? And I expect the other 'prisoners' aren't really suposed to be there either. Gunther must be brought down, but how, and by whom, I haven't a clue!! I'm hoping Angie can come up with something, know someone? It would have to be someone who had more authority than Gunther. Well, Joan, this is one heck of a chapter, very well done. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thanks. Sandra,
You have some good ideas about plans of escape.'
Joan
Comment from royowen
One wonders how can this be, surely this was a mass kidnapping, who can possibly be armed with this sort of power? Gunthar really is a slimy con man, how could he possibly be governor, of the jail, or the state. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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One wonders how can this be, surely this was a mass kidnapping, who can possibly be armed with this sort of power? Gunthar really is a slimy con man, how could he possibly be governor, of the jail, or the state. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thanks, Roy, for another nice review. I am glad you are enjoying the story
Joan
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nice chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows well when it's read aloud and it also is well structured in both sentencing and in paragraphing as well Patricia .
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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This is a very nice chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows well when it's read aloud and it also is well structured in both sentencing and in paragraphing as well Patricia .
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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I appreciate your continued interest in the story. Thank you for the nice review, Patricia.
Joan