His Face
Suppressed anger can be deadly3 total reviews
Comment from Stephen Wendt
Good action, with a great twist at the end. For only having to be 100 words, this got the point across. I would like to see the rest of the story to find out what happens.
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Good action, with a great twist at the end. For only having to be 100 words, this got the point across. I would like to see the rest of the story to find out what happens.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 27-May-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I'm glad that this story is fiction. A lot of violence; if anyone did such an action they would be in prison for the rest of their life. I truly believe if you feel this way about a person, turn your back and walk away.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I'm glad that this story is fiction. A lot of violence; if anyone did such an action they would be in prison for the rest of their life. I truly believe if you feel this way about a person, turn your back and walk away.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Yes, you should turn and walk away. That would put you in control over your emotions instead of them controlling you.
Comment from lancellot
Yes, the reader expected a twist or surprise ending. But, this may not be one most readers will gravitate towards. Killing kids tends to push most reader away. But, you never know. Good luck in the voting.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Yes, the reader expected a twist or surprise ending. But, this may not be one most readers will gravitate towards. Killing kids tends to push most reader away. But, you never know. Good luck in the voting.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Killing does push away a lot of readers here. I am searching for the right audience and they are hard to find.
