Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Poor Miriam, she was really stuck between a rock and a hard place, without even knowing it. I do hope she isn't abused by this powerful man. Her family will soon see how much she was doing at the farm, and in the house, that will come as a shock to them! I think there might be a time in the future that Miriam will need them, as much as they would need her back. Powerful chapter, Joan, I'm really enjoying this story. Well done!! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 21-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Thanks again Sandra.
Joan

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I suppose our protagonist has good reasons to move out and live with Gunther, despite what Natalie thinks, but we tend to do what we want to, if our mind is made up, which it appears to be, beautifully written Joan, blessings. Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2024

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reply by the author on 21-May-2024

Hi Roy,
Thanks for your continued support and encouragement.
Joan

reply by royowen on 21-May-2024

Most welcome

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

You have got my attention by writing about something I can relate to but the line structure is such that it is difficult to read. Please I suggest you edit this and change the sentence structure to make it easier to read.
Jesse

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

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reply by the author on 20-May-2024

I will try to see what I can do to correct the problem, Jesse.
Joan. As you know, I am mainly a poet. I thought I try to spread my wings.
Joan

reply by Jesse James Doty on 20-May-2024

I know It's difficult to switch from poetry to prose. Keep trying. You'll get it.
Jesse

reply by the author on 20-May-2024

Thanks for the encouragement.
Joan