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Terracide

We spit in the face of our Creator

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Comment from Erika Whittle
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I whole heartedly agree. Great job fitting your concept with the syllable count. Humans are so destructive we would set the world on fire for personal gain. It's truly sad.

 Comment Written 20-May-2024

reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    Many thanks, Erika. Appreciated.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hello. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck in it.!

You taught me a new word Terracide. Tierra means earth in Spanish. Probably the origin

I wrote a long poem about this, about corporations raping the earrh. Your poem addresses it more succinctly but effectively

I wonder if I'm the only one who didn't know the word tarracide. Maybe put it and its definition in your notes.


Well done. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 19-May-2024

reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    Thank you so much, Pamusart. Terracide is a neologism. I think I just made it up, combining the Latin words for Earth and Killing. Good suggestion.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I thought your poem showed us an message about the destructive impact of human greed on the Earth - which is so horrific - especially when we look at it as a gift of the planet from God. I thought your poem shared a powerful message in an amazingly concise manner!

 Comment Written 19-May-2024

reply by the author on 20-May-2024
    So kind. Many thanks.