Shopping at Wal-Mart
It would be easier to talk about what they don't have21 total reviews
Comment from Jill D
Love Love Love it! This is my type of poetry. Your rhyming is exceptional. I smiled all the way through this, you even put me in the mood for a cheese on Ritzð???
Best of Luck!ð?¤?
Jillð???
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Love Love Love it! This is my type of poetry. Your rhyming is exceptional. I smiled all the way through this, you even put me in the mood for a cheese on Ritzð???
Best of Luck!ð?¤?
Jillð???
Comment Written 20-May-2024
Comment from Wendy G
It was fun to read too! We don't have Walmart over here, so your post was informative as well! It sounds like an amazing place - both good and bad! Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
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It was fun to read too! We don't have Walmart over here, so your post was informative as well! It sounds like an amazing place - both good and bad! Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from Boogienights
That's why everyone goes there! I love your great poem about my favorite store, with a reminder of all the good things you can find there. It's fun to shop there and maybe it's minnesota nice, but l seldom see any drama. Best of luck in the contest. :)
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That's why everyone goes there! I love your great poem about my favorite store, with a reminder of all the good things you can find there. It's fun to shop there and maybe it's minnesota nice, but l seldom see any drama. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from EeanBlack
It is so easy, as you stated, to talk about what they don't have. The biggest thing I've noticed is checkers. They are all going self check out. They don't pay me for that or give me a discount for doing their work.
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It is so easy, as you stated, to talk about what they don't have. The biggest thing I've noticed is checkers. They are all going self check out. They don't pay me for that or give me a discount for doing their work.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from Raul1
You have listed everything that is in all Walmart shops. I don't recall anything else that they sell at that shop. Excellent work! Nice. Thank you for sharing!
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You have listed everything that is in all Walmart shops. I don't recall anything else that they sell at that shop. Excellent work! Nice. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
Fun, fun, fun poem. I can see that you had fun writing this one. So much available at your local wal-mart.
Great picture to compliment your piece. I was looking for the people who shop in their pajamas but now you see those people everywhere. Haha.
Blessings
Janet
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Fun, fun, fun poem. I can see that you had fun writing this one. So much available at your local wal-mart.
Great picture to compliment your piece. I was looking for the people who shop in their pajamas but now you see those people everywhere. Haha.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
You have thought of all sorts of things found at Walmart and included them in a smooth flowing rhyme. They have clothes, food, and unusual things I've looked up like travel bags to attach to wheelchairs and walkers.
I really enjoyed your humorous list, and wish you the best in the contest.
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You have thought of all sorts of things found at Walmart and included them in a smooth flowing rhyme. They have clothes, food, and unusual things I've looked up like travel bags to attach to wheelchairs and walkers.
I really enjoyed your humorous list, and wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from gansach
I haven't been to my local Wal-Mart in quite awhile, but they do carry just about anything you can think of and there are usually some pretty strange customers there shopping for it. You have quite a comprehensive list in your poem, well covered. Your rhymes are good. Very nice! Good luck!
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I haven't been to my local Wal-Mart in quite awhile, but they do carry just about anything you can think of and there are usually some pretty strange customers there shopping for it. You have quite a comprehensive list in your poem, well covered. Your rhymes are good. Very nice! Good luck!
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Goodness me! It sounds like your Wal-Mart sells everything! So one trip to one shop and your all set for the week ahead. That you were able to make it all rhyme, was amazing. Very well done, I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Good luck!! :)) Sandra xx
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Goodness me! It sounds like your Wal-Mart sells everything! So one trip to one shop and your all set for the week ahead. That you were able to make it all rhyme, was amazing. Very well done, I'm sure this will do well in the contest. Good luck!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-May-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I think you most certainly have covered the entire merchandise of Walmart here! I really enjoyed your huge array of items skilfully put to rhyming verse. Some great 'g' alliteration too. I think my favourite line in terms of diversity is: drain cleaner, gum and gargle for voices. No wonder you had fun! Good luck! Debbie
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I think you most certainly have covered the entire merchandise of Walmart here! I really enjoyed your huge array of items skilfully put to rhyming verse. Some great 'g' alliteration too. I think my favourite line in terms of diversity is: drain cleaner, gum and gargle for voices. No wonder you had fun! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-May-2024