A Four Letter Word Called Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "In the Wings of Dawn "A collection of love poems.
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Comment from Julie Helms
This is a very romantic, sexy poem! The repetition of wings of dawn is effective in setting the mood. The imagery and mood is languorous. Really nicely done!
Julie
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reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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This is a very romantic, sexy poem! The repetition of wings of dawn is effective in setting the mood. The imagery and mood is languorous. Really nicely done!
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank you. I deeply appreciate your reading my poem and your encouraging comments.
Comment from patcelaw
I enjoyed this poem very much. I like how you use it in the wings of Dawn at the start of the first few stances and then you end it with the very same line. It's a wonderful way to do the presentation. Patricia .
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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I enjoyed this poem very much. I like how you use it in the wings of Dawn at the start of the first few stances and then you end it with the very same line. It's a wonderful way to do the presentation. Patricia .
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 15-May-2024
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Thank for the stars and encouragement.