(Gator) Bait and Switch
A very sad tail...9 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This witty, animal 5-7-5 is definitely witty! I laughed at the last line. It was hilarious. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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This witty, animal 5-7-5 is definitely witty! I laughed at the last line. It was hilarious. Thank you so much for sharing this, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 30-May-2024
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Thank you, Jessi! I'm glad it got a chuckle out of you!! xoxo
Comment from bob cullen
What a sharp sense of humour. Bet the allegator's not laughing. You are very clever.
Gee, I've got to add more. How about, very, very clever. (need another 9 characters. That should be enuff.)
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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What a sharp sense of humour. Bet the allegator's not laughing. You are very clever.
Gee, I've got to add more. How about, very, very clever. (need another 9 characters. That should be enuff.)
Comment Written 29-May-2024
reply by the author on 29-May-2024
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HAHAHAHAHA. That's hysterical. I like your candor.
Comment from Jill D
LOL !! This is brilliant and so funny. What a wicked sense of humour you have.. hee hee..I loved it. You should be on the stage:))
All the best.
Jill:)
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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LOL !! This is brilliant and so funny. What a wicked sense of humour you have.. hee hee..I loved it. You should be on the stage:))
All the best.
Jill:)
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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In the olden days, the next sentence after "you should be on the stage" was "It leaves in ten minutes." hahaha.
Thanks for this very nice review. xoxo
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Lol!.. You're welcome:)
Comment from bonespur
This was a pretty funny poem. Your structure of the poem is right and the humor is there as well. I just happen to be watching swamp people on tv and its about alligators
lol. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This was a pretty funny poem. Your structure of the poem is right and the humor is there as well. I just happen to be watching swamp people on tv and its about alligators
lol. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Oh, hahah!! What timing for you! That's funny. Thanks for the very nice review. I certainly appreciate it. xo
Comment from lyenochka
This punchline is too clever to not get more reviews! I enjoyed the ambiguity and seeing both an alligator with martial arts skills or one that's transformed into a "black belt."
I just got my white belt. Lol. No danger from me, really!
Sorry I did not read your prize-winning post as I don't read the posts with scary warnings!
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This punchline is too clever to not get more reviews! I enjoyed the ambiguity and seeing both an alligator with martial arts skills or one that's transformed into a "black belt."
I just got my white belt. Lol. No danger from me, really!
Sorry I did not read your prize-winning post as I don't read the posts with scary warnings!
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Oh, it's okay. The truth is, I never do, either! This one is pretty benign (as in, to the point that several reviewers asked why I even HAD the warning!) [and the answer was: because it said in the contest rules that it had to be listed as "Adult/Erotic."] I just decided to try my hand at something new - spread my writing wings, if you will.
Anyway, thank you for this nice review, Miss White Belt! (That is very exciting! How do your joints feel the next day? Is your class for adults, or are you the fun and delightful grown-up among all the kiddies?)
xoxox
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Lol...the majority of us are seniors! 😂 I don't mean high school types
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lol
Comment from AP Apgar
An excellent poem- very clever -made me smile!- (becomes a black belt) good picture presentation- syllable count and flow - I like your sense of humor - well done-
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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An excellent poem- very clever -made me smile!- (becomes a black belt) good picture presentation- syllable count and flow - I like your sense of humor - well done-
Comment Written 17-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thank you, Apgar! Very much appreciated. xo
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww that's a sad end for your alligator! Still, he should have been wiser about his choice of friends! Original and a witty entry for the contest, fulfilling the brief. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Aww that's a sad end for your alligator! Still, he should have been wiser about his choice of friends! Original and a witty entry for the contest, fulfilling the brief. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Still, it's hard to feel sorry for an alligator.
Thanks for the very nice review. Very much appreciated.
Comment from Nicki.B
This poem is very funny, short and sweet with a giggle thrown in. The poor alligator!!! Well done, thanks for sharing it made me laugh and good luck with the competition
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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This poem is very funny, short and sweet with a giggle thrown in. The poor alligator!!! Well done, thanks for sharing it made me laugh and good luck with the competition
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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What a nice review! Thank you for your kind, validating words. Very much appreciated.
Comment from gansach
I was curious to see what this contest would be. Your 5-7-5 poem gave me a laugh--both animal and witty. I like it very much! Great job! Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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I was curious to see what this contest would be. Your 5-7-5 poem gave me a laugh--both animal and witty. I like it very much! Great job! Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 11-May-2024
reply by the author on 11-May-2024
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Thank you!! I appreciate this review very much.