2024 Gypsy's Tanka
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "Immense Night"*
8 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Loving somebody and having the loved returned. It seems to happen often. I wish I knew why and could fix it. It's happened since the beginning of time. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Loving somebody and having the loved returned. It seems to happen often. I wish I knew why and could fix it. It's happened since the beginning of time. Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend !
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
aww unrequited love... maybe someday... maybe not...
a great tanka with good imagistic word choices and a smooth flow - center line is a perfect pivot as he drowns in grief
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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aww unrequited love... maybe someday... maybe not...
a great tanka with good imagistic word choices and a smooth flow - center line is a perfect pivot as he drowns in grief
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend !
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....Sounds like something I would have written right after my divorce, minus the groveling! No, I didn't write any poems of despair, but I was thinking it. I didn't want to say anything to make her feel bad or embarrass myself
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....Sounds like something I would have written right after my divorce, minus the groveling! No, I didn't write any poems of despair, but I was thinking it. I didn't want to say anything to make her feel bad or embarrass myself
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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LoL yeah, I know.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Happy weekend !
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
That is so sad. The grieving keeps reaching out to the lost beloved through words which never get to her. I like how you show his emotion of grief with the "immense" night which gives grief of night a tangible feeling.
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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That is so sad. The grieving keeps reaching out to the lost beloved through words which never get to her. I like how you show his emotion of grief with the "immense" night which gives grief of night a tangible feeling.
Comment Written 10-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister
Love,
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
It is sad when this happens. I have experienced it myself. Luckily I was very young at the time, so it was part of growing up. I like the tone and mood of your words and the imagery sets the lonely feeling.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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It is sad when this happens. I have experienced it myself. Luckily I was very young at the time, so it was part of growing up. I like the tone and mood of your words and the imagery sets the lonely feeling.
Thanks for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very well written poem you have penned in the Tanka format. You used very good descriptive words to go with your imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Gypsy, This is a very well written poem you have penned in the Tanka format. You used very good descriptive words to go with your imagery. Thank you for sharing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy
Comment from Nicki Nance
The night is huge when you're feeling small. Your presentation is clever and formatted perfectly for the message. The graphic is perfect. I can feel the wind hitting her face.
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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The night is huge when you're feeling small. Your presentation is clever and formatted perfectly for the message. The graphic is perfect. I can feel the wind hitting her face.
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Nicki
Gypsy
Comment from Brandi Radaker
Absolutely stunning poem. I throughly enjoyed reading this and could feel all the emotions she was feeling along side her. Best wishes and lovely work!
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Absolutely stunning poem. I throughly enjoyed reading this and could feel all the emotions she was feeling along side her. Best wishes and lovely work!
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 10-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Brandi
Gypsy