Meeting of Minds?
The verbiage of business jargon3 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A poetic creation for the Idiom poetry contest dripping with idioms and so effectively laced together and to tell a tale at the same time- should make it to the winner's enclosure - wish I had a 6 left1
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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A poetic creation for the Idiom poetry contest dripping with idioms and so effectively laced together and to tell a tale at the same time- should make it to the winner's enclosure - wish I had a 6 left1
Comment Written 09-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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So kind, Zanya. That lovely review has lifted my spirits.
Comment from Sallyo
Very entertaining, but I think you need to bold or italicise the idioms to meet the letter of the rules. I especially liked the parrot/carrot rhyme. I've always pondered the sick-as-a-parrot. Most of them aren't sick!
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Very entertaining, but I think you need to bold or italicise the idioms to meet the letter of the rules. I especially liked the parrot/carrot rhyme. I've always pondered the sick-as-a-parrot. Most of them aren't sick!
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Many thanks.
Comment from RodG
I truly enjoyed how you mixed in SO MANY idioms in this poem. I do feel I was there at the meeting listening to the boss go on and on. Your humor made me chuckle, but I have to confess I'll never be a fan of AABB rhyming. Rod
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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I truly enjoyed how you mixed in SO MANY idioms in this poem. I do feel I was there at the meeting listening to the boss go on and on. Your humor made me chuckle, but I have to confess I'll never be a fan of AABB rhyming. Rod
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 09-May-2024
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Thanks, Rod. It is the simplest, therefore least ambitious, rhyme structure making the writer?s task more straightforward.