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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I feel we entomb ourselves. God will set us free if we allow him.
To pressurize your thoughts into dreams beyand imagination. (beyond)
Contained to remain verified Entombed.cocooned as time's now frozen. (comma instead of a period after 'Entombed,' & then a space is needed.)
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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I feel we entomb ourselves. God will set us free if we allow him.
To pressurize your thoughts into dreams beyand imagination. (beyond)
Contained to remain verified Entombed.cocooned as time's now frozen. (comma instead of a period after 'Entombed,' & then a space is needed.)
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 17-May-2024
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Thanks again.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from royowen
Once one is entombed it's so hard to break out from that prison. I've been free from judgement's bondage for some years now, it depends which God we serve as to freedom's thrust, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Once one is entombed it's so hard to break out from that prison. I've been free from judgement's bondage for some years now, it depends which God we serve as to freedom's thrust, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-May-2024
reply by the author on 07-May-2024
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Thanks Roy and have a pleasant week.
Doctor Ricky