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Turmoil ruptures the soul
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Comment from
Mark Jackson
I would say that the image is fear, anger, and happiness. It might have helped a tiny amount to have cropped it down to just fear. The words are great. Just four lines and yet you have crammed so much into them. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
Thanks, Mark. Have a great day!
Comment from
Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written poem you have penned for the Emotions contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery with the artwork you chose. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
Thank you, Teri. Have a great day!
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