Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely poem of deep love and longing and it seems to go beyond a physical love. I liked the " a creek of dreams " and "drumbeats of love
to the rhythm of life's trills
composed with passion's notes "

 Comment Written 07-May-2024

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reply by the author on 07-May-2024

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love

Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

sleeps on flowerful meadow -- this reads off... maybe "A flowerful meadow"? or "meadowS"?

love this line!! hand over my heart feeling drumbeats of love...

a great tanka suite with nice imagery
thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 06-May-2024

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reply by the author on 06-May-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley. I added an A

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Comment from Mike Stevens

Excellent

Another fine poem, Gypsy, and another one that sadly has never applied to me, thought it did, but alas, same as a Trump voter, twas but delusion on my part, saw something that wasn't there!

 Comment Written 06-May-2024

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reply by the author on 06-May-2024

LoL. I'm sure is not that bad but I know what you mean, I'm attracted to loosers. I finally gave up.

Thank you very much, Mike.

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Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Very romantic. I love that this wasbased on a Biblical theme. I will have to check out this book in the Bible. I have always been partial to Proverbs. Just full of wisdom. Beautifully done. Gretchen

 Comment Written 06-May-2024

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reply by the author on 07-May-2024

My friend Helen asked me to read them a while back and I love them. They are very passionate and romantic. It's strange to find something like that in the Bible but I'm not an expert. I think you would like it.

Thank you very much, Gretchen.

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Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

I really like this one, it is passionate and sensual. The words are like money that is sweet, but burns if and when you drink it too fast. Nice work. Thanks for sharing with me. Have a wonderful night or morning.
RJ

 Comment Written 06-May-2024

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reply by the author on 06-May-2024

Thank you very much, RJ.

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Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Your words of love are beautiful, as you combine love with the power of nature, an excellent Tanka suite, so very descriptive and heartfelt, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

I don't think anyone actually writes these words of love that you write so articulately into your stylish and wordful poems of love and intimacy as well as you do Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

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reply by royowen on 05-May-2024

Most welcome

Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova

Excellent

This is a beautiful and touching poem. It shows the depth of your love and respect and admiration for your lady fair. What a wonderfully sentimental and sweet thing to write.

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

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