Comment from Mark Jackson

Excellent

I found reading this a truly confusing process. I do not like superfluous information being posted into the area which should be reserved for your writing. There is a box for the title and your name and for notes. This appears to be poetry but I am happy with poetic prose. I enjoyed your writing I did not enjoy having to work out exactly where it begins. I hope this helps. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-May-2024

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reply by the author on 05-May-2024

Thanks for your comment and review.Most human beings do not understand the depth of my writings.
Always when you review my work.
Please go to the editor's notes.
They will help you!
Doctor Ricky 1035

reply by Mark Jackson on 05-May-2024

So I guess you didn't like my review because I was open and honest. Your response is to given me an unfavourable review in return. I abhor bullies and always have done.

reply by the author on 05-May-2024

I'm sorry you feel that way.
Next time I suggest to read it a second time.
Including editors notes.
Keep writing.
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In addition.
I reviewed what you wrote the way.I felt it was deserved.If you have any problems with that you can block me.
Three stars is an appropriate review for the product you posted.
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Mark Jackson on 05-May-2024

Keep telling yourself that. What was it 3-5-3.

reply by Mark Jackson on 05-May-2024

Keep telling yourself that. What was it 3-5-3.

reply by Mark Jackson on 05-May-2024

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I know this has to break your heart each time you think of your son and what happened to him. It is beautiful that he was a donor and helped so many people. Thank you for sharing. May God bless you and be with you my friend! Teri

 Comment Written 04-May-2024

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reply by the author on 04-May-2024

Thank you Teri.
Thank you Teri.
You are always a sweetheart to me and Jay.
Richard
Richard

reply by Teri7 on 04-May-2024

You are so welcome my friend!